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[ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Xray » Jul 8th, '08, 08:57

Title: The Formula For The Weak EP
Artist: SaJJad
Production: Tash8, VTZ, Syanied, NG Muzik
Executive Producer: Tash8
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Cover:
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TRACKLIST:
1. Its All Clear Now (Prod. By NG Muzik)
2. Trapped In A Plague (Prod. By Tash8)
3. Six Six Six (Prod. By Syanied)
4. Bump (Prod by VTZ)
5. Filthy Beast (Prod. By Tash8)
6. Trapped In A Plague (Remix)(Prod. By Tash8)

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http://www.zshare.net/download/17422883bcc8fe0e/


Special Thanks To:
McMaybe: The Great Album Cover.
Tash: For Everything Else.
Chet: For sharebee link.

Enjoy!!

New Link Up. thanks to kez :b:
Last edited by Xray on Aug 22nd, '08, 01:32, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak - SaJJad

Postby Nu Syd » Jul 8th, '08, 08:58

damn nice cover, downloading now :b:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak - SaJJad

Postby Tash8 » Jul 8th, '08, 09:00

PLEASE to everyone, please leave feedback on the beats. At Least, for the In House Producers like Syanied and Me. Thanks!

Also, we worked really hard on this for a whole week and we managed to finish it, we hoped to do 1 or 2 more songs for the EP, but recording times were really hard to obtain and being in different time zones it was even harder, but we got it done!

All feed is appreciated!

----Note---- The main reason for the remix was for the people who didn't like the original beat, it's not really a remix but rather a re imaging of the song.
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Solace » Jul 8th, '08, 09:41

Ill dl it now and listen to it tmmrw, but hell that is a fucking cool cover man! Cant wait to check this shit out!Whos SaJJad? Your rap name?

EDIT: motherfucker i tried dling it like 4 times, it said "500 - Internal Server Error". :unsure:
EDIT: hahaahh it worked muffugaaass!!
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 8th, '08, 09:54

Sucked.



But for real heres my true feed

1. Its All Clear Now (Prod. By NG Muzik)
Not gonna comment on the diss part but rest of it was alright loved the beat d Flows perfect on it, great mixing and dubing. Though I didn't like that it was kinda short you should of made it longer in my views. 4/5 (just because of the length but verse all good track)


2. Trapped In A Plague (Prod. By Tash8)
Didn't really like the piano but i got use to it sounded to repeating like. You flowed well on the beat end rhymes hit the snare pretty well in my opinion. Great lyrics. Good title like it Trapped In A Plague I thought you were going to call it where i live. 5/5


3. Six Six Six (Prod. By Syanied)
Beat reminds me of eminem dont know why it just does. The beat seemed to overpower the vocals I didn't like that too much. Mixing could of been worked on a bit more. Good chorus was catchy I liked that. Good track again over all. Good emotion you put in it and anger. 5/5


4. Bump (Prod by VTZ)
Damn hot beat agree with what you told me on msn could be your hit song here. Cant give any negative views on it. Chorus is dope as hell good work. 5/5


5. Filthy Beast (Prod. By Tash8)
Sorry hated the beat just not really my feel on a beat I could see it on some super hero movie or something or a video game thing. But still flow was there It could of been worked on a lot better. Good mixing for Tash never really heard his work done. I'll give this track a 3/5

6. Trapped In A Plague (Remix)(Prod. By Tash8)
Good laid back style but why have the original mix then a remix on a mixtape lol should of saved it for another. But it did flow pretty well. Good song 4/5



Over all yeah good mixtape I'll give it a 4/5 over all. Any question that you got about my rating ask or ask on msn.

shadymademe wrote:Ill dl it now and listen to it tmmrw, but hell that is a fucking cool cover man! Cant wait to check this shit out!Whos SaJJad? Your rap name?

EDIT: motherfucker i tried dling it like 4 times, it said "500 - Internal Server Error". :unsure:
EDIT: hahaahh it worked muffugaaass!!


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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Kosovic » Jul 8th, '08, 11:07

Downloading now....and as u know, my reviews are harsh.

Btw, the cover is not square.
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 8th, '08, 11:11

shiiiiiit coms on the fritz till i get a new keyboard (hopefully today) using my sisters laptop n cant download anything on it :( if everythings go's to plan youll have a full review tonight :8) cover is fucking sick btw :y:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 8th, '08, 11:34

downloadin...review asap :worship:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 8th, '08, 11:55

aite..here we go..1st of all loving ur new quality
It's All Cear Now- damn sick delievery thru the whole track.... :worship: wont say anything about the diss...but flow was sick too..as i said ur delievery is so dark u cant escape it :worship: mixing is awesome....9.7/10

Trapped In a Plaque- Already fed it...

Six Six Six- Damn catchy beat...flow was nice one it...catchy hook....good work on it...energy is dope...lyrics :worship: 8.8/10

Bump- Nice lil beat by VTZ.....the verse are fire....but the hook aint my taste...a bit more text wouldnt hurt :y: lol....lyrics again :worship: maybe the vocals could be a lil lil lil bit louder..8.4/10

Filthy Beast- Really great beat by tash :worship: altho the melody could be more "powerful" becuz its gettin kinda boring after a time...with these long notes...oh well..drums are nice and laidback..tash mixed it i think...its a bit hollow...too much reverb or somthin...to sajjad....flow is stable...lyrics are decent..nuttin too special...8.3/10

TIAP Remix- lol at the beat..melody is weird..but does the work :y: if im right sajjad re-recorded this one.....emotions are really nice :worship: matchin the beat...8.5/10


Overall: pretty sick and constant tape...1st track started off VERY sick....but the it got just DOOOPE :worship: not sayin its bad....defo worth the download....as i said..quality was amazing..pro quality or almost :worship: nice nice....the producers did a good job... :y: wut can i say...
URD!!! It's about to start ..again :worship: Download That SHit!!
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Kosovic » Jul 8th, '08, 12:18

Its All Clear Now 2/5
What happened to the rest of the song? You seem to copy Game's flow on this one. The short length destroyed it tho. It has some replay value but dont expect much.

Trapped In a Plague 2/5
So much emotion. But no replay value. You try too hard on this one, if it doesnt come out naturally, then you have a problem.

Six Six Six 2.5/5
Oh i see you used all cliches in this one. Hmmm, i dont really know what to say about it, some would consider it an anti-christ song, though basically is just a skill showoff with a devil/evil spinoff. Seems being the "bad guy" is now a trend.

Bump 3.5/5
Gaaah....i feel the need to hate VTZ, all his beats are the same. Well, at least they are free. Yeah this reminds of D12. We got the idea, showdown. You can listen to it, i admit, more than one.

Filthy Beast 3.5/5
Hmmm.....right. Thinking of it...i wonder if you can handle minimalist beats. Why you need grandiose magnificent beats you rap on them? Anyways, yeah that was a good attempt. I can listen to it more than twice certainly.

Trapped In A Plague 2/5
A different beat doesnt qualify it to be better. Especially when the beat is inferior to the first one.

25/50
Mediocre attempt, saved by the fact that is an EP and there is no need to be diversive, but rather stick to the topic, until the time for a full length disc. At least you have excellent quality in your vocals, making it possible to listen to it.
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 8th, '08, 15:38

Here's the feed, track by track.

1. It's all clear now:
Really tight track man! I love the flow, it's raw and genuine. The lyrics are really good in my opinion. And the chorus is awesome, it fits well with the beat wich is also really, really good! Good beginning on the EP!
4.5/5!

2. Trapped in a plague:
I think I already gave feed on this one, so I'll skip it now.

3. Six six six:
Well, not really my cup of tea. A good attempt on the topic, but you don't quite catch the feeling I want for this type of track. But the lyrics are good and the song is well mixed. Though I think the beat could be suited better for your lyrics, because it isn't vicious enough in my opinon.
3/5

4. Bump:
I love the beat and the little intro! The lyrics are really nice and fits the beat perfect. You got the right emotion and delivery along with a tight-ass-flow man! The best track so far on the EP! The chorus almost gives me goosebumps! Really nice melody in the end too!
5/5 :y:

5. Filthy beast:
Cool intro, cool concept. An average track in my opinion. Not bad nor good, it's aight. You got nice flow on it, with nice lyrics.
2/5

6. Trapped in a plague (remix):
The beat is better on this one! It has a sadder feeling over it. As I said when I feeded the track itself, you got really tight and deep lyrics on this one. So good work on the remix!
5/5

Overall:
An awesome EP for being done in only a week. The quality is great and the mixing is really good. You got some awesome songs on it, the best being "Bump". Defenitly worth downloading and keeping. Keep up the good work and make sure to post more tracks in the same spirit as "Bump"!

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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 8th, '08, 16:27

it was enjoyable way more on beat then anything I could do
nice little tape...
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 8th, '08, 16:38

Track 1 - Its All Clear Now - really intense beat witch fits the concept, your flow is on point the whole way and overall sick. delivery is the perfect amount of intense anger, and your speak clear the whole way, strong lyrics slid rhyming, some good punches in there aswell, the chorus at the end is mixed well and does its job, i would aliked another verse rather than the extended chorus but it doesnt take away from the track. and i respect and knwo you did do all this in a week so i aint complainin. also a really good opener because of the intensity and it grabs your attention as soon as you come on track. great track man. Mixing is awesome btw.

Track 2 - Trapped In A Plague - already left feedback.

Track 3 - Six Six Six - Love the beat drums are solid and the melodies are hectic and sound out of place a little but it works 100% becuase of the concept. first verse has a great flow, the delivery is great aswell very good variation. lyrics are solid aswell some ncie rhymes in there. I really like the hook it works sound great and is catchy. second verse, sounds more intense and is still great flow is better on this verse. "i got more skills than a track with a plaque" nice little line with a jab at the mainstream lol solid rhyming aswell. third verse. different approach with the catchy breakdown, it works and some nice number play it aint bad but aint great, alot better once you get back into the straight rapping, again great flow delivery and solid lyrics. mixing again is awesome man, excellent use of overlays and shit, good work.

Track 4 - Bump - Beat si adifferent style than the other tracks, but its still sick. "bite like a pitbull im a zombie when it comes to flesh" fucking zombie spirit is dope man. solid lyrics again, greta flow and delivery. chorus i didnt like in first listen but after a couple of listens it grows on you and the beat helps it since its simple it gets catchy and hooks you in lol. Verse 2 is dope some of your best lyrics in it man, espeically the rhming.flow is great aswell delivery again flawless. third verse, again solid rhyming flow si greta again excellent delivery.

Track 5 - Filthy beast - i like this beat, the brums are good and the meoldies sorta dont fit but whats good about everything fitting ? not fitting is what makes public enemy so sick and i like this sound, the vocals do helpit join together more though. flow again fucking sick for the most of it man sometimes you slow down a little bit and its not as good but never off flow and delivery flawless. some dope lines in here the highlight "mother earth and yeh im the father, didnt mean the fuck the world but it felt great a couple of blisters in hell like a bandade, sensai when it comes to cum stray, been training my sperm knows karate, im next imrpoves mr miagi" fucking dope man. people dont like this track, idk why its on my favourites i like thats it just straight spitting for nearly 3 minutes and you dont fall off, great track.

Track 6 - Trapped In A Plague remix - ok a quick review for this one,i like the original more coz i like the darker sound, but this isnt bad and could suit other peoples taste's.


Overall - ok sounds like hes the best rapper alive in the review lol, but anywae, i think all the tracks are good, your delivery cant be faulted coz you got emotion when its needed you got good variation aswell, your flow is never off sometimes its great sometimes its just good, but never off so i dont complain. you go a solid rhyme structure and dont every go to simple or to complex, also good at the punches aswell and good humor/evil concept and meetaphors in there so thats all dope for me, especially since its my fav style of hip hop lol

to improve, i think you got to up your level to the second verse of bump lyrically, that was seriouslty dope if your lyrical level came to that all the time youd be a better rapper, i aint syaing you bad now but that was alot better than your average standard, but you did in that second verse so its not as if you cant and sometimes not goin complex is better for the track so i take it as you can decide when you wanne go all out lyrical and knowing you can do that is enough for me not to care when you choose not to do it ya know.

this EP had a set of dark concept style so ofcourse i got to mention that you dont get took into the same concept too much, i knwo you can do other concepts you did them in the past and i aint gonni complain coz i love thee dark concepts.


maybe im a bit bias coz this is my style of hip hop i love to listen to, but i cant fault one track. defiantly one of the best if not the best EP or mixtape released on this forum. from a personel view it suits my taste of hip hop beat lyric and concept wise. so yeh i guess my review is a little bias. but i enjoyed listening to it and will listen again and again and again, i alreayd listened like 3 teams and had a coupleof replay for a while and i aint gonni hold back the praise when i like the thing. i know it sounds liek dickriding but take it as you will, this is a dope EP
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby mart85 » Jul 8th, '08, 16:57

props on the size of the file, and since it's an EP, it won't take me 2 months to leave feed lol
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 8th, '08, 17:16

Great job man. I thought all the songs were good, but i don't think the beat for "666" fits very well. And i don't like the remix of "trapped in a plague". Keep it up.
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