
All The Family Misses You [2006]
All The Family Misses You.mp3
My Everything [2007]
My Everything.mp3
Xray wrote:you definitely got potential in you. from a lyrical stand point, your decent. from a flow stand point, also decent. delivery is getting there, just keep doing what you do, and don't force anything and you'll improve and adapt different ways to spit etc thats the only way to not force anything and let everything come at you naturally![]()
don't worry about quality at the moment, main thing is mastering your rap ability![]()
i listened to the first track (2006) not much of it though, so my feedback is mostly based on the (2007) song. good shit man, keep doing what you do.
ahaha mission acomplished lol, naa for real, cool shit definitely looking forward to more of your musicdfg wrote:Xray wrote:you definitely got potential in you. from a lyrical stand point, your decent. from a flow stand point, also decent. delivery is getting there, just keep doing what you do, and don't force anything and you'll improve and adapt different ways to spit etc thats the only way to not force anything and let everything come at you naturally![]()
don't worry about quality at the moment, main thing is mastering your rap ability![]()
i listened to the first track (2006) not much of it though, so my feedback is mostly based on the (2007) song. good shit man, keep doing what you do.
Aww thanks man!! Believe me, I'm gonna keep doing it, Nothing is gonna stop me rapping, nothing at allI agree with you on the whole focusing on mastering my rap ability
And I also totally get where you're coming from about adapting to different ways to spit, Coz listening to them tracks and one of my new ones they sound completely different but it's all good
Yano something, this is THE single best comment I have had off anyone, thank you!!![]()
It's also going to be one of those I remember when I'm up on stage reciving a grammy(I Wish)
Xray wrote:ahaha mission acomplished lol, naa for real, cool shit definitely looking forward to more of your musicdfg wrote:Xray wrote:you definitely got potential in you. from a lyrical stand point, your decent. from a flow stand point, also decent. delivery is getting there, just keep doing what you do, and don't force anything and you'll improve and adapt different ways to spit etc thats the only way to not force anything and let everything come at you naturally![]()
don't worry about quality at the moment, main thing is mastering your rap ability![]()
i listened to the first track (2006) not much of it though, so my feedback is mostly based on the (2007) song. good shit man, keep doing what you do.
Aww thanks man!! Believe me, I'm gonna keep doing it, Nothing is gonna stop me rapping, nothing at allI agree with you on the whole focusing on mastering my rap ability
And I also totally get where you're coming from about adapting to different ways to spit, Coz listening to them tracks and one of my new ones they sound completely different but it's all good
Yano something, this is THE single best comment I have had off anyone, thank you!!![]()
It's also going to be one of those I remember when I'm up on stage reciving a grammy(I Wish)
McMaybe wrote:Lol... I guess it's true when Jin said everybody raps.
Tash8 wrote:McMaybe wrote:Lol... I guess it's true when Jin said everybody raps.
i guess that means everybody produces too
Kez wrote:Well i listened
Not enough emotion, flow is robotic and your lyrics are decent but could be much better.
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