Sic Transit Gloria... Glory Fades

[Robbie G]

I loved the beginning. "absolute dynamite" lmao...

flow started off really good but got off a little bit during the end.

Overall pretty good though.

[Tash8]

the beginning 2 lines u sound like lil wayne. your slowing your words 2 much, ur expanding the syllalbes 2 much... just add more words to the line...

[B.A.D.]

smh my computer is being gay these days, but I'll manage to listen

hahaha

I'll feed you then

[<Stiiccy>]

hmm nice shiit chet...
your gettin alot better man
the quality was ehhh but it was listenable
your flow was very good, even tho you slowed alot of shiit down like tash said
lyrics did the job
topic has been done before, but it never gets old
beat was awesome, i loved the beat man

[Kez]

So you rap again now?

Beat is nice, hook/samples are or8 but a bit overused
Your flow is good at most parts but it got a bit shaky at times
Some decent lyrics, i'm sure with an actual concept you'd be much better

Keep workin and if you're doing a mixtape you know i better be on it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i basiclly agree wit tash with the lil wayne part
and about the expanding thing..try to put the RIGHT amount of words in ur line
keep it up man

[Xray]

man this is definitely an improvement from your last audio

quality is much better and understandable at least. fuck the lyrics yo, the flow is getting there man, and since you expanded your words and said it slower to flow on beat, that means you now can flow on the snare so good job man, its not a magnificent audio but it is an achievement from your last so good job bro, your getting there

[Tornado]

just on flow and voice, like c-riz and tash said u did sound like Lil Wayne but i thought it fell off halfway..btw "absoulute dynamite" lol

I'm sure I'm pretty good with feed for most of you guys...I still need to feed that axe and kez track.

and Tornado's LP

BTW...Dont Tell No One bout the thing :shifty:

[B.A.D.]

ok, I love the beat

this is def your best shit, flow is cool, needs a little bit of fixin but works fine, quality is good, I like that kind of mixin

I love this concept, and you worked on it pretti well.... very very impressive

I felt inlove with the hook

fucking loved this one

[B.A.D.]

ok, I love the beat

this is def your best shit, flow is cool, needs a little bit of fixin but works fine, quality is good, I like that kind of mixin

I love this concept, and you worked on it pretti well.... very very impressive

I felt inlove with the hook

fucking loved this one

Thanks man alot man, some great feed

the hook was awesome

I can send the beat to you...since I'm done with it now.

I can do a second verse 2 it

[Epidemik]

nice!! lol intro was fucking killler!
beat was fucking sick.. never heard it before.. somebody make that for you?
best possible topic to rap about ever lol
lyrics were sick! maybe memorize it first so it flows a bit better.
pretty dope though man!

[Robbie G]

How'd you do that voice at the beginning? I;ve heard that alot on jmt and like it.

[randomghost]

lovin the beat....flow was good....lyrics is simple....quality sucks a bit....good short track...good work man....just work on ur quality...and try to make ur delivery more powerful and as tash said fill more words between bars...coz sometimes u go fast and some time slow...be precise...thats all for now..man...keep doin what ya doin....

[DelinQuent]

beat is sick, where did you get it?

flow is jerky, you keep slowing down and speeding up to fit words.

lyrics are weak. not a fan of the concept. keep working