Unreleased DFG Remix

[dfg]

Inspiration (Unreleased Remix)
This Is A Remix Of A Track I Wrote For My Girlfriend That Is On My 1st Mixtape, It's Called Inspiration. This Remix Isn't Going To Be On Any Albums Or Mixtapes.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/15683574c454bf66/

[Xray]

i like the beat. flow and delivery is crazy. lyrics are great. track would of got a 9/10 or 10/10 if you had a proper mic good shit though besides the mixing

[picture me rollin]

this song is dope n da beat is bananaz.u did thiz all yourself?

[dfg]

I wrote and did the lyrics myself, but the beat was off my mate

[Tornado]

i like the beat. flow and delivery is crazy. lyrics are great. track would of got a 9/10 or 10/10 if you had a proper mic good shit though besides the mixing

gotta agree, coool beat and good flow mixed with some awesome lyrics this is my fav track i heard from you so far

only other thing i say is to turn your voice up a bit..keep it up

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

some parts the flow is far to stop start, like instead of your bars flowing to the snare the snare is sperating them and making it feel pre-made, you need to practice your breathing aswell when you dont do the stop start flow your sound out of breath. lyrics were fine for the concept, beat was good, delivery was a little bored at times, mic quality really needs to be improved and mixing, the chorus aint to good either mostly because of the mixing. another thing about the delivery is your holding your words to flow "loooove you" " and maaaybe i get all craaaazy" if the word aint meeting the beat add smaller sylybles in the bar coz holding the word sounds bad.

lyrically nothing special but thats not the concept, but when doin this concept and not having a great mic the most important thing is lost (delivery)

keep it up

[dfg]

some parts the flow is far to stop start, like instead of your bars flowing to the snare the snare is sperating them and making it feel pre-made, you need to practice your breathing aswell when you dont do the stop start flow your sound out of breath. lyrics were fine for the concept, beat was good, delivery was a little bored at times, mic quality really needs to be improved and mixing, the chorus aint to good either mostly because of the mixing. another thing about the delivery is your holding your words to flow "loooove you" " and maaaybe i get all craaaazy" if the word aint meeting the beat add smaller sylybles in the bar coz holding the word sounds bad.

lyrically nothing special but thats not the concept, but when doin this concept and not having a great mic the most important thing is lost (delivery)

keep it up

Ent got time for a full reply coz im abit busy at the min, but thnx for an honest opinion...apriciate it man