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love you more freestyle better quality

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 24th, '08, 00:32

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Re: love you more freestyle better quality

Postby Emadyville » Jul 24th, '08, 00:37

not bad, just a little slow for the beat
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Re: love you more freestyle better quality

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 24th, '08, 00:46

thanks bro :y:
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Re: love you more freestyle better quality

Postby Kez » Jul 24th, '08, 01:09

Needs more expression and variety in the delivery, but your lyrics are pretty funny

Flow is too slow for this beat
Quality sounds alright
Hook seemed a bit random and didn't relate to the track, and it wasn't sung that well

But good track, i can see improvement :shifty:
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Re: love you more freestyle better quality

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 24th, '08, 01:11

Thanks kezomoto :shifty:
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Re: love you more freestyle better quality

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 24th, '08, 02:02

i could not take this track seriously. i laughed my ass off listening to it, lol!
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Re: love you more freestyle better quality

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 24th, '08, 02:08

Darkblade44431 wrote:i could not take this track seriously. i laughed my ass off listening to it, lol!

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