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Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 27th, '08, 22:19

Here a hot new track from my tape. I changed the name to VerbalTouch because it got annoying when people asked me what does vayonic mean. NOT THE FINAL MIX. I dunno if everyone likes it i'll keep it this way if not I'll have someone mix it better.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/160763744ab76c12/
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 27th, '08, 22:27

ur flow is still messy some lines are too short
aint feelin kez his verse neither... :unsure: flow is weird too
sajjad does a decent hook :y:
uhm yeah there are volume problems...very uneven...so hope the final mix will have this fixed
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby Fa$iC » Jul 27th, '08, 22:27

beat and chorus are great but the two verses should be overworked!
the first is too slwoly and brethless and the second need more power. lyrics are good, when ya´ll overwork the verses it gonna be a real good song
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 27th, '08, 22:32

Thanks like I said its gonna be mixed better just thought I'd got some more feedback.
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 27th, '08, 22:40

tried to download like 4 times, and it wouldnt work, fancy uploading it on sendspace or something ?
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 27th, '08, 22:46

can i trasnfer to you on msn?
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby Tash8 » Jul 27th, '08, 22:49

that was so bad, you guys managed to fuck up my high, no joke.
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 27th, '08, 22:50

djblue wrote:can i trasnfer to you on msn?



yeh :8)
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby Kez » Jul 27th, '08, 22:52

Damn as if you posted it without checking with me first :shakehead:

I daren't check for the end result.
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 27th, '08, 22:53

I left you messages :o
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby Kez » Jul 27th, '08, 22:54

djblue wrote:I left you messages :o


I was offline. If i don't get the messages until after you've posted it, what's the point?
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby Steve Spag » Jul 27th, '08, 22:54

The hook was sick.
Both verses though seemed a little off flow though.
And the quality wasn't the best.
Keep it up :y:.
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby Requiem » Jul 27th, '08, 23:29

the hook is good, but the chorus needs to be louder. and the beat during the verses isn't so great. and the voices aren't in very good quality, has that metallic scratchy sound, and their too loud. overall- alright, needs work. :y:
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby Xray » Jul 28th, '08, 07:41

damn i thought i told you ill finish the song? what on earth did you do to the whole song? compress it? :confusion:

sounds weird and quality is wack as fuck man, shit you need to send me kez's verse so i can finish mixing cause damn you cant have a song with mixing like that leaked lol

btw thanks to the peeps who liked the chorus :whistle:
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Re: Still Be Me ft Xray,Kez

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 28th, '08, 12:09

i liesten but i aint feeling this mix, when sajjad offers to mix a track you take him up on it, the guys a genious at it for pete's sake :y:



got potential though, chorus was great, blue sounded better than what i heard before, and kez's verse seemed as if it would be dope if it wasnt badly mixed lol
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