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D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Jul 29th, '08, 01:00

I haven't written or recorded a full song in probably a year, but when I heard this beat it really fit with what was running through my mind. :y: This song is actually untitled..I don't have a name for it yet. Produced by RapitFly.

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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 29th, '08, 01:05

wow ur flow is fire man.. :worship:
lyrics and pronouncation is decent
the hook...naw leave the singing lol...but the rappin part was good again
u really got a sick flow.. :y: work on (even) more complex lyrics....
9.2/10.... :y:
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Jul 29th, '08, 01:18

^ appreciate it chris :y:
i hate choruses i had to wrap it up real quick but i was trying something a lil different haa
thanks again..im fixing to peep your song
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby Emadyville » Jul 29th, '08, 02:15

Damn. I only listened cause of the good feed you got from Chris and I'm glad cause that was some good shit. Like he said flow was really sick, lyrics were on point, rhymes were tight. Like chris said too if you made them a little more complex or some doubles or something this would have been even better, but great job :y:
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby Tornado » Jul 29th, '08, 02:16

your flow is very good on this, very clear,,only thing is there could be more emotion in your voice but other than that nice stuff
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby Kez » Jul 29th, '08, 02:19

Saw this track getting acclaim, so i had to check.

Sick beat
Flow, i agree, is bloody good :y:
Lyrics and rhymes i also think are sick, and my favourite part of the song :y:
You could have more emotion in your delivery
Quality is good
Concept is different
Hook is alright but the singing aint exactly perfect

But sick track, lookin forward to hear more from you
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby Requiem » Jul 29th, '08, 02:26

you've got a really good flow, lyrics on the second verse were incredible. the chorus wasn't very good, but overall great track. :y:
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 29th, '08, 02:51

loved the beat...great flow
good lyrics...but bad quality
9/10
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby Xray » Jul 29th, '08, 06:25

love the concept man, i can relate to this song 100% i feel the exact same thing bro :y:

flow is crazy on the verses, simply flawless.
lyrics are above average and mean a shit load.
delivery is sick aswell, perfect shit.
chorus might be rushed but fuck cares its good anyway :y:

tight song man 10/10

looking forward to more tracks of you :y:
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 29th, '08, 11:04

word id defiantly would like a collab with you great hit (Y)
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 29th, '08, 13:35

You really sound like a famous rapper, but I can't remember his name!

This track is dope.
Your flow is insane, really good with, in my opinion, very good delivery for this track.
And the beat is also really good, I like it a lot!
The lyrics are sick, with a lot of great lines and rhymes.
And I love the hook, the singing is really nice and puts that little extra into the song.

Overall a really good track, I give it 9/10! :y:
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby Jay_LP1 » Jul 29th, '08, 14:57

Now that's what I call a GOOD song.

Your flow is damn good and pronunciation is up to scratch.

Lyrics are good too. But, I didn't like the chorus that much.

Still, 9/10

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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby DelinQuent » Jul 29th, '08, 21:37

flow is bonkers like everyone else said.

rhymes are great. loved the acquaintance and nameless rhyme.

i wasnt feeling the slow part of the chorus.

as i listen the rhymes keep getting better.

an absolutely great track minus the beginning of the chorus. 9/10 :y: keep it up
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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby Speech » Jul 30th, '08, 08:21

holy fuck...flow is...greater than great...hmm i don see anything bad in this song (exept for the chorus, don sing, please haha)
your rhymes and flow are the only one i can see on this beat, pro work :y:
deep topic, to be honest i wish i could write like that *no dickriding*...but yeah, enjoyed this big time, you can get somewhere with your lyrics and that natural flow dawg
beat sounded like a sampled version of Bow Wow's BIG DREAMS, loved the beat

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Re: D-Beau - It's Strange [A Full Song]

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Aug 1st, '08, 20:33

I want to thank everyone who listened to my song! I wasn't expecting so many replies. As for the "singing" part on the chorus, I actually wasn't trying to sing lol. It was supposed to be my voice in a softer tone. Anyway I'm going to change it, but still keep the lyrics the same, just minus the softer tone. :y: I appreciate it everyone! :8)
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