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sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 3rd, '08, 05:23

well this song is about 2 months old
it has my boy leprikon on it
its called "Usaul Suspects"
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby Ak25 » Aug 3rd, '08, 05:44

Good beat, the only thing is the flow/rythme of the lyrics. How you say what you say. But everything else is good, good beat, good lyrics
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby DelinQuent » Aug 3rd, '08, 06:25

beat is pretty sick.

chorus is weak, not feeling it.

1st verse was eh, flow kept fallin off.

2nd guy was good, his flow was good. butminus the racist shit about head rags. "take it in the ass more than the people of iraq, who cant blubberblubber of head rags" i turned it off right after that. bullshit racist :n:
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 3rd, '08, 06:47

DelinQuent wrote:beat is pretty sick.

chorus is weak, not feeling it.

1st verse was eh, flow kept fallin off.

2nd guy was good, his flow was good. butminus the racist shit about head rags. "take it in the ass more than the people of iraq, who cant blubberblubber of head rags" i turned it off right after that. bullshit racist :n:

we love freedom of speech
your just being a fuckin pussy
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby Emadyville » Aug 3rd, '08, 07:34

Flow was a little off, thought the beat was nice just didn't fit the song, couldn't tell how serious or comical you were trying to be, and the "taking it in the ass" and rhymes that followed that shit was a little pointless I thought from where you were at in the first verse. Thought the concept was good you just went off topic it seemed.
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby Ak25 » Aug 3rd, '08, 09:08

sticcy z wrote:
theres nothing wrong with a lil profiling every now and again

just dont do it to much
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 3rd, '08, 11:43

sry aint a fan of the melody....as emadyville said couldnt tell how serious u was trying to be....plus wut DQ said about 2nd guy
delievery didnt really fit the song
lyrics were..aaaaiite
and flow got better....still fell off at some spots
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby Xray » Aug 3rd, '08, 13:41

sticcy z wrote:
DelinQuent wrote:beat is pretty sick.

chorus is weak, not feeling it.

1st verse was eh, flow kept fallin off.

2nd guy was good, his flow was good. butminus the racist shit about head rags. "take it in the ass more than the people of iraq, who cant blubberblubber of head rags" i turned it off right after that. bullshit racist :n:

we love freedom of speech
and fuck iraq

fuck iraq? man what the fuck is your problem? damn im disapointed in you for being that imature man. damn i thought you were mature? to say something like that, damn thats just disrespecting my background. "theres nothing wrong with a lil profiling every now and again" profiling a nation just cause they had a war with your nation? man you know what fuck you.
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 3rd, '08, 17:53

Ak25 wrote:
sticcy z wrote:
theres nothing wrong with a lil profiling every now and again

just dont do it to much

**says the guy that wants to kill all gay people*** lmfao

**calls chet** :shifty:
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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 3rd, '08, 18:43

This is probably the best track I've heard from you. The beat is pretty sick and everyone seems to flow pretty good on it. There were some parts where it could've been better, but it's all gravy. Keep it up man.

Check out my new track when you get a chance too and let me know what ya' think.

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Re: sticcy z usaul suspect

Postby Tornado » Aug 6th, '08, 02:41

where is it..not on it anymore?
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