Retalliation

[Rain Matrix]

Track- Retalliation
Artist- Rain Matrix
Album- Independant
File Type- MP3
Link- retalliation.mp3 - 2.46MB

[Speech]

wtf was this...can't believe you used the lollipop remake lmao...

1. speak up!!!
2. geta better mic, or a mic at all!!!!
3. fix that flow, expanding is horrible
4. use beats you can actually flow to
5. don disappear magically, but if you do...stay away lol
6. try harder if you wanna make this rap shit a hobby, forget a career
7. oh and mix better or at least UP the vocal volume
damn never gave that many advices...lol...just practise harder before you post your next joint

[<Stiiccy>]

wtf was that shit

fix your voice...put more effort into your words...dont just talk over a beat
dont use faggot ass beats like that
fix your flow...get your swag up

just practice homeboy

[MoBrat]

ima have to agree with spizzy ur shit sucks would be better with a different beat and better mixing like i said before send me ur un mixed accapella and beat then i'll try and help u cause this aint good

[Kez]

lol

[Jay-19]

lol

Agreed.

[DelinQuent]

guys chill, he's gonna die free, like america... LMFAO

[Rain Matrix]

just cuz yur scared of tha US government doesn't mean I am
so drink yur water go outside and suck chemtrail dust u ignorant fuck

we'll probably bomb u next

[Kez]

Isn't it cool to do text rap in every post you make
Best thing is, you can just dissapear if people don't relate!

[MoBrat]

rain dont post tracks on here if u dont wanna hear what ppl really think...some of us try to give real feed n help others just give u bullshit n fuck with u but dont feed into it man keep doin ur shit man...u got good lyrics u just gotta slow it down a bit and get ur flow before using ur mad multies that u do in ur text...in other words take it easy use simple rhymes and get ur flow then u can step up and use ur sick lines

n kez stop pickin on him, he can be a decent artist if he gets good feed on where he went wrong

EDIT: send me ur vocals next time man ur mixing isn't great n i'll try'n help u improve ur flow and mixing to make ur shit sound a bit better

[<VerbalTouch>]

n kez stop pickin on him, he can be a decent artist if he gets good feed on where he went wrong

kez can do what he wants

[MoBrat]

n kez stop pickin on him, he can be a decent artist if he gets good feed on where he went wrong

kez can do what he wants

very true but it dont help the artist nor is it even feed back just a useless post like this 1

[<VerbalTouch>]

n kez stop pickin on him, he can be a decent artist if he gets good feed on where he went wrong

kez can do what he wants

very true but it dont help the artist nor is it even feed back just a useless post like this 1

useless posts is the key to happiness

[Kez]

Sorry, but he doesn't want help.

Every time someone tells him what he needs to improve on, he just talks a load of crap about people hating on him and "dissapears" Then he comes back a few days later with another track with the same problems, no improvement, and expects everybody to tell him it's amazing or else he just brags about how he won the writing tournament and that therefore means he doesn't need to improve.

Frankly, it's annoying.

[DelinQuent]

kez is absolutely correct.

Rain asks for feed then someone points out his complete lack of delivery and suddenly they're just hating on him. If he's not gonna accept feedback he shouldn't ask for it