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Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 22nd, '08, 23:36

Well I figure ill drop an awesome track for all you people to enjoy or hate frankly i dont give a fuck :flower:
its called Life's Highway

peep it at http://www.myspace.com/sticcyz08

please feed!!!!!!!!!!!

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i got a lethal dose right here in arms reach,
pray for the day i can stand on my own feet,
rollin out for 2 dont forget about me,
show enough played, for what the critics will think,
i done found what i want, cant let that go,
so i carry that weight where ever i go
i cant see the whether, the cloud is over me
am the lost one, or the one they neva seen,
blast (blast), goes the truth, can handle it yet,
done made fun of the am, but then takled the vet,
instead - yo imma lose control, let the cards just fold,
put it for sell but its done been sold
i shiver im cold, then rolled in my rag peice,
riches starin at me, broke as ever thats whats happening
cocky aint word, its how they claim me


man i feel optimistic, the win i missed it,
since i been in here the wind i miss it
arrest my wrist hit, different areas same position
chips and lipstick, lemma rip the henges,
police so susipices, feel the tension,
we in hells kitchen, when ya get the shovel,
homie get to diggin, rippin the tent in,
hit then dented, killin im kiddin,
in ya area, sticcy cause mass hysteria,
type 1 maleria, its not threat but im darin ya,
make one move, gosh ill bury ya,
i cant teach that, i take care of ya,
just for materials, wigias make me happy,
the dragon makes me sad, he killed all my dreams,
then took all i had, could it get any worse,
or have they took all i have
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby Epidemik » Aug 23rd, '08, 00:30

nice. sick beat. quality aint bad.
flow was good, lryics are pretty good to man.
id bump it! :y: :y:
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 23rd, '08, 00:33

thanks maybe
and thanks epidemik!!

i appriciate it
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 23rd, '08, 00:36

but whats up with the dragon? lol

the dragon is a refrence to satan

and thanks bro...
i am tryin to use a calmer version of my voice
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby Xray » Aug 23rd, '08, 04:34

that's wassup :worship:

mixing was better than your usual i noticed except could of maybe made the acapellas louder alittle bit.

track was nice man, beat was dope, lyrics were crazy. the sample goes well with your concept.

the flow was good, delivery wasn't what i expected but still good. 8/10 good shit :y:
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 23rd, '08, 04:35

Xray wrote:that's wassup :worship:

mixing was better than your usual i noticed except could of maybe made the acapellas louder alittle bit.

track was nice man, beat was dope, lyrics were crazy. the sample goes well with your concept.

the flow was good, delivery wasn't what i expected but still good. 8/10 good shit :y:

thanks homie!!!
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Aug 23rd, '08, 06:18

Xray wrote:that's wassup :worship:

mixing was better than your usual i noticed except could of maybe made the acapellas louder alittle bit.

track was nice man, beat was dope, lyrics were crazy. the sample goes well with your concept.

the flow was good, delivery wasn't what i expected but still good. 8/10 good shit :y:


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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby MoBrat » Aug 23rd, '08, 06:52

love this track the orignal that is lmao, but ur flow is good, u need 2 lower ur vocals a bit on the first verse maybe its cause im using headphones but sound a bit 2 loud...n the intro sounds a little weird cause it stops for ur vocals just personal preferance but i'd perfer if u had it a little differentlike beat and ur vocals at the same time, just sounds a little chopped 2 me but the chorus sounds better even with the chopped form...even with the flaws it was a decent track
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 23rd, '08, 12:33

i actually think the breaks in the chorus are pretty kool :p
delievery was nice man...but it sounded as u swallowed some words...
so pronouncation could be a bit better :sweating: but yeah the flow was okay too...
as everbody else...me likes the sample :)
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 23rd, '08, 12:36

This beat is fire man! The hook is freaking awesome! Really sticks in your mind.

You voice is a little different, but that's all good, would it be fun if everybody sounded the same? No. But I like the way you spit your shit. You lyrics are good to, even though I don't think everything rhymes, but that's okay when you somehow cover it up so you don't think about it. Delivery is good to, and mixing is tight.
Props for this track man! :y:
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 23rd, '08, 18:45

KillahGoat wrote:This beat is fire man! The hook is freaking awesome! Really sticks in your mind.

You voice is a little different, but that's all good, would it be fun if everybody sounded the same? No. But I like the way you spit your shit. You lyrics are good to, even though I don't think everything rhymes, but that's okay when you somehow cover it up so you don't think about it. Delivery is good to, and mixing is tight.
Props for this track man! :y:

thanks man
and thanks criz
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby Darkblade44431 » Aug 25th, '08, 22:43

i don't really like what you did with your voice on this track..well, it sounded like you did something with it. i also didn't like the delivery. I think the beat could of been better too. Keep it at though, i've heard some other stuff from you that was good. ur a good rapper, i hope to see more stuff from you.
btw, while i'm posting this, do you wanna start working on a collab?
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Aug 25th, '08, 23:15

Darkblade44431 wrote:i don't really like what you did with your voice on this track..well, it sounded like you did something with it. i also didn't like the delivery. I think the beat could of been better too. Keep it at though, i've heard some other stuff from you that was good. ur a good rapper, i hope to see more stuff from you.
btw, while i'm posting this, do you wanna start working on a collab?


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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby $0 R3@L » Aug 25th, '08, 23:45

not bad.

bit too much 'forced sounding anger' in your voice,makes you sounds like one of those annoying christian preachers at times.The rhymes are decent but room for improvment.I like it.Sample was
a nice classic choice,beat was ok but didnt keep my attention for the whole song.

Good stuff,i expect with more work for you too be making fairly good music.
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Re: Lifes Highway --- you know who it is

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 25th, '08, 23:59

$0 R3@L wrote:not bad.

bit too much 'forced sounding anger' in your voice,makes you sounds like one of those annoying christian preachers at times.The rhymes are decent but room for improvment.I like it.Sample was
a nice classic choice,beat was ok but didnt keep my attention for the whole song.

Good stuff,i expect with more work for you too be making fairly good music.

thanks for the feed
and thats not force anger thats my style sorry if you dont like it im like a grunge/rap really
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