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burn as sacrifice (jmt beat)

Postby enjinn » Aug 28th, '08, 06:03

a track i did a while ago...i added vinnie paz second verse...all feedback will be returned... http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6207994
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Re: burn as sacrifice (jmt beat)

Postby Kez » Aug 28th, '08, 08:04

I actually quite liked it

Rhymes were sick and flowed pretty well

Bad idea adding VP on your second verse though

Beat i already know, but sounds good
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Re: burn as sacrifice (jmt beat)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 28th, '08, 09:49

wtf soundclick was a bitch to me...heard like 1minit and then it fucked up :unsure:
so yeah from wut i heard ...u had a sick flow and pronouncatioon was good too
the intro was a bit screwed :unsure:
keep it up...sry that didnt listen till the end :sweating:
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Re: burn as sacrifice (jmt beat)

Postby enjinn » Aug 28th, '08, 16:58

thanks a lot for the feedback...its much appreciated
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Re: burn as sacrifice (jmt beat)

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 28th, '08, 21:52

oh the saviourself beat lol

lol, soundclick player fucked up for me too before it even got the 1:00 mins

but true, from what I could hear, sick flow, and good emotion... good preview lol

u should zshare it
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Re: burn as sacrifice (jmt beat)

Postby enjinn » Aug 29th, '08, 19:23

thanks a lot for the feedback!...looking to collab with dope mc's
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