Fame Aint Everything ft enjinn

[<VerbalTouch>]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/178041989f744a33/

Last one il be posting in a while...for real it will be thanks for the verse enjinn

[<VerbalTouch>]

Nah outside recording next audio thread posted will be some sort of tape still deciding with mixtape/ep/or lp

Thanks

[Xray]

dope fucking song compared to your standards

enjinn was dope, except alil pronunciation problem, but good shit.

dope verse from you blue who made the beat? shits fucking dope

8/10

[<VerbalTouch>]

duno enjinn gave me the beat with the verse already made so i was like yeah alright dopeness lol hanks

[Tash8]

^ decent song, djblue u need someone to mix ur shit, cuz quality could be a lot better.

[<VerbalTouch>]

damn Tash is that like the fourth time you bitched about quality...

but thanks i guess

[Big Proof 4ever]

i dont kno which one spitted 1st and 2nd,but i liked 1 st verse more,quality defo cud be better,it seems u both dont have confidence on this one,well maybe just for me i like beat,so its pretty good song

[DelinQuent]

1st verse had good flow, rhymes were good too. good usage of multis.

the 2nd verse, had great emotion, flow sounded a little off. rhymes were decent. way better than your last couple verses. lyrics were also a step above your other shit.

overall you've improved tenfold from when you first started

[Tash8]

damn Tash is that like the fourth time you bitched about quality...

but thanks i guess

quality is important believe it or not, good quality can make a verse 100 times better, it improves ur delivery a tone more, just ask vettori...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

ejinn was on the 1st verse right?...sick flow pronouncation and everything worked well on that track
djblue ur voice sounded extremly tired...and flow slipped at times..not sayin its bad...defo or prolly your best so far
7.8/10

[<VerbalTouch>]

thanks
Tash a program cant make your delivery sound better delivery is all about the rapper you forget that we cant afford real studio quality or know how to work wit a program with ease other then thats your getting annoying when you just talk about quality in audio stage my very first recording was on a mp3 player so imagine the quality in that

[B.A.D.]

whoa, beat is crazy

enjinn's first verse is hot, the flow is strange but does the work... sounds real nice, lyrics are tight

your verse shows a lot of improvement, delivery is great, lyrics improved a lot too, flow still needs a lil bit of fixin... other than that very nice verse

nice lil' skit lol at the end

real real good track

[enjinn]

thanks a lot for the comments!!!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

first verse - good flow, different voice but i like it, delivery was nice and your lyrics shine at certain times didnt like the unnecessary (yo) just randomly over your verse, but your controled the beat nice and i liked the vibe good verse.


second verse - flows isnt there you arent goin to the snare or anything at all your on beat some times from just pure luck coz your just rapping over it, i did it when i just started out but trust me you got to grab the concept of flow better, lyrics were ok nothing that made me care too much, delivery was un even and you got to control you voice a bit more but it wasnt to bad keep it up.

[mcZu]

Not bad, beat was nice ( if I'm not mistaken the beat is a instrumental from ''Jedi mind tricks'' ), first verse was great, lyrics were great, flow was nice, only thing that kinda sucked in the first verse is the dellivery...you kinda sounded tired? I dunno maybe it's just me, but you sounded like that, eventhough it was a sick first verse
Second verse was nice, lyrics were great, only bad part was that you kinda flowed off beat, you flow was way off at times. Delivery was nice.
Overall song is great