Big Ax-D!! - Bitch I'm The Bomb

[B.A.D.]

this is my first promo for my fifth album "THE SECRET 08'"
it will be an album kind of diferent of what I always do, 20 tracks and something like 18 features haha, I'm still missing for someverses but it will be made as its sposed to, the first single might come
around early october. more info soon....

about this track
Title: Bitch I'm The Bomb
Artist: Big Ax-D
Album: promo
Produced by: Big Ax-D
Mixed by: Big Ax-D
Download link: http://www.zshare.net/audio/183166895df39191/
Lyrics:

(Verse)
I don't stop, even a low born can lure youre death
my fingers still sticky, when ur outta my bed
they love the criminaly haggard look I get
my gymnasium's my pen, my evolution is set
to beat the human race, with myself on first place
a nigga ocasionally mazes you into the land of disgrace
haha, you don't like that do you??
(you don't like that do you??)
If I get off my sit, is to verbally abuse you
confuse you... defuse the bomb and glue it to me
I'm the realest, dunnie... nigga want it?, sue me
I'm not a spend-thrift... I'm a jack rabbit who spits sick
with a big dick... trash rhymes??... its sick shit

Grab your cammera nigga, its Big Ax-D... take a good picture
In the worst disposition, I pay 50 cents for 50's policeman
I miss them... I'm kidding... truth Is I never met them...
Thank God I'm still unkwon and mexican... we the best men
dessicated but a freshman, illuminated as the master
builded up faster (ended up balling)...
I'm calling a reunion of the top heads of us who still smiling
cuz you turn on mtv and 50 trash rappers wilding
theyre truth trash niggaz, Pop ya lipgloss, and suck my dick after
I'm a slacker... a complete disaster... a bastard... but a rapper

a hot penguin... cold lava... I'm brilliant.... I'm nada
an Ice cube... en la playa... a million on a fake prada
a black out... so shiny... I have only rappers for dinning
I'm preposterous... top of class... disasterous... still smiling

i think I'm offside, a moron, nigga don't try to run from me
I'll catch you, now I'll brake, then I'll bake you... time to eat
a lot of it... well recieved first... served for breakfast after
don't trust me no more... still I grow trust faster
hate me now you bastard.... hahaha!!!!

I'm stayin strong... coming home like I ain't been there
I'm so juiced dawg... with a fat chick, cuz I can't see her
I'm living fine now... with the stupidiest rhymes man
nigga don't u see I'm just messing with your ears friend
don't listen to me..... ya hurd?

fuck this flow.... It sucks

enjoy

[Tornado]

beat was weird as hell and flow was all over the place but you knew that..hopefully i get to hear better shit from your new tape man

a hot penguin... cold lava... I'm brilliant.... I'm nada
an Ice cube... en la playa... a million on a fake prada
a black out... so shiny... I have only rappers for dinning
I'm preposterous... top of class... disasterous... still smiling

that part sounded sick tho

oh yea..need to holla to you about the feat

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah...beat was weird as hell and flow was all over the place....
matter a fact..beat was fuckin annoyin...plus the background voice overshadowed ur rappin sumtimes...so if u gon do somthin like this again...then try to avoid it....

[Tash8]

omg lil wayne? not feeling the beat..

flow is cool, feels real empty...

honestly, this is my least favorite first single you did...

i'm excited for your second single though

[<Stiiccy>]

this reminded me of lil wayne's track "a milli"
flow was crazy bro idk what to think about it tho
well i guess you did all you could considering the beat
so for trying
but ive heard better from you

[Robbie G]

It was definantly different man and I actually liked it. The beat was pretty far out there but you did well on it.

Nice job.

[Xray]

omg lil wayne? not feeling the beat..

flow is cool, feels real empty...

honestly, this is my least favorite first single you did...

i'm excited for your second single though

this isn't a single of his album, its a promo track

this track goes well with the term promo imo. cause the beat is not an album beat but its pretty dope. ppl saying lil wayne LOL if lil wayne had an aight voice i'd listen to his shit!! but for you killed the beat imo...just some breathing problems here and there other than that its straight. lyrics were pretty good...again unique as fuck.

9/10 cause its very unique and i liked it

[B.A.D.]

yup, its defo not my single lol... its just one of the many promo's I have prepared lol

@Tornado: thanks bruh... I wuz jus playin round lol... chek ur pm

@C-Riz:

@Chet: thanks bruh, glad you liked it!!

@Tash: haha defo not my single haha!... but thanks for chekin bruh, appreciated

@Sticcy: thanks a lot bruh!! I was actually tryn to diss that track with this lol

@ShadyBaby: word word!! thanks a milli (lol)!!!

@Sajjad: WORD, I try to keep it diferent of what I always do hahaha , thanks m8,

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

you steal little waynes flow for alot of bars with the repetetive stop starting, your flow overall is the weakest ive heard from you, you created the beat so im thinking why make the kick and snare rolls when you dont attempt to rap with them ? it sorta confused me when the rolls came in and youd stop or youd keep goin at the same pace and not try keep up with the beat..

delivery was lathargic sorta slow paced even sounded like you were bored so much you dragged some words out. prouncation was kool for me but i read the lyrics while it was donwloading so thats how i never had problems, i could hear a couple of times when you did spead up it got a little muddled so some people could have a problem with that, i personely never.


lyrics were the best thing, some solid rhyming and nice lines although it did feel like you couldnt be bothere at times and the lyrics were sorta just there coz you couldnt be bothered thinking of something better to say because content wise this is weak and there bored flow and delivery means there isnt much more to make it apeal.



the beat was nice nothing amazing but i think if it was handled better by the vocals it would have apealed more, the sample is nice and fits in with the "lil wayne fan" but overall i didnt enjoy this track too much like lil wayne, it sounds like a beat he would use a flow he would use and a sample he would use and the lyrics are the type of vague with no meaning stuff he uses.


still looking forward to the album

[Speech]

i gotta be honest...beat was all bad to me lol..i knew you was gonna sample a wayne statement when i read the title...lyrics were nothin special..but i couldn undertsand everything...the beat messed it up...sorry but i didn enjoy this..i know your up to way better so this (failed) attempt is no reason to bring your whole work down..you got joints i know

keep that other shit up yo
peace

[$0 R3@L]

concept of the beat was good but fell flat on its face and head first into a pile lil waynes shit.

half your lines dont make sense,alot like wayne.
half the flow,well there was none,like wayne.
the concept was blurry and needless,again like wayne.

this was a bad attempt that shouldnt of been attempted.

[Kez]

Bar sums up my feelings. Look foward to the tape tho bro!

I'm afraid all i could say has already been said by Bar

[B.A.D.]

I was actually tryn to diss that track with this lol

(A Milli from Lil Wayne).... I made the flow and delivery extremely stupid like a mock to that track, to make fun of it.
so I take all your comments positevely even if their negative, cuz thats my point

proving that flow like that sucks.... (thats why I said it at the end of the track)

anyway, thanks a lot for chekin, very appreciated

@ Bar: thanks for the big breakdown, I apreciate a lot you listened and took your time to write that, extreme thanks, I gotta apologize for not making myself clear from the begining lol... thanks a lot bruh

@ Spizz: thanks for chekin, million thanks bruh, my real shit is dope you've hurd a couple

@ Killa: true, thanks a lot for chekin bruh, appreciated!

@ So Real: whoa!, haven't seen you around for ages haha, thanks a lot for listening

@ Kez: hahaha, thanks for listenin bruh

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

(A Milli from Lil Wayne).... I made the flow and delivery extremely stupid like a mock to that track, to make fun of it.
so I take all your comments positevely even if their negative, cuz thats my point

proving that flow like that sucks.... (thats why I said it at the end of the track

just wanted to say that in my opinion, if that was your intention you should have had a intro explaining it a little and then KILL the beat, flow vicously good with great lyrics and it would have proved that wayne doesnt put effort into what he is doin and that a real rapper can kill his style better than he can...but like i said thats my opinion of how you should have handled a idea like this

[B.A.D.]

(A Milli from Lil Wayne).... I made the flow and delivery extremely stupid like a mock to that track, to make fun of it.
so I take all your comments positevely even if their negative, cuz thats my point

proving that flow like that sucks.... (thats why I said it at the end of the track

just wanted to say that in my opinion, if that was your intention you should have had a intro explaining it a little and then KILL the beat, flow vicously good with great lyrics and it would have proved that wayne doesnt put effort into what he is doin and that a real rapper can kill his style better than he can...but like i said thats my opinion of how you should have handled a idea like this

you right, I forgot to put an intro or at least explain it... (tho I thought it could be clear cuz this ain't even close to my usual standards)... but I appreciate your comments... I'll keep em in mind for next tracks like this.