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[NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby SajN » Sep 9th, '08, 11:22

A track by me and Jay-19 (KillahGoat)

Just note that the lyrics were written some time in February .. :happy:


http://www.zshare.net/audio/18412261d26c6fe3/

Enjoy :y:

Lyrics:

Title – Northern Lights
Artists – Jay-19 Feat. SajN
Beat – Silent Death (Rapitfly)
Mixed by: C-Riz

[1st verse . Jay 19]

When the tip of your pen touch a piece of paper
Do you care if streets love it or the streets'll hate it
The very first time I ever jotted a rhyme
I swear on both mom and God I spotted a sign
From that day forward hip-hop was my lifestyle
Caught in a blindsight, starving to find rhymes
All I want to be is be a part of the limelight
Don't care bout the money I focus on lyrics
All these knuckleheads do is poke us and fear it
Don't give a flying fuck, I'm a serious lyricist
And people are furious they want to get rid of us
Curious to know just how my home look like
Not a fairytale but not a broken home either
We all gonna explode and I'm floating on ehter
I'm both Biggie and Eazy, wrapped in one man
The game got the whole world trapped in one hand
The spirits of all rappers, living inside of us
If only I jusssst, could be given the time to bust
I'd make ya'll believe me, it only just begun
Lots of people 'round me, but lonely as the sun
When my pen's out of ink, I got no more to write
But that ain't gonna happen, I just wrote 4 tonight
Jay-19 and SajN, we're the northern lights
And thanks to all of you, who taught me right

[Chorus]

it never get old, then we know, that it's hip-hop
if it got soul, then we hope, that it don't stop
if we get cold, we go home, to our own block
back to the lab, close the door and return hot

it never get old, then we know, that it's hip-hop
if it got soul, then we hope, that it don't stop
if we get cold, we go home, to our own block
back to the lab, close the door and return hot


[2nd verse . SajN]

From the day I discovered this beautiful light
I felt I had the power and the spiritual inside
A lyrical vibe decided to give it a try
A tribe of mics, I got the eager to write
And price the musics masterpiece,
The rap, hip-hop, the real arts are these
For them the place in my heart increased
And it started to beat cuz of rap, just for that,
It was my combustion, trust me,
I was nuthin’ without it
Just an ass and a rotten coward
but this rap power made me escape it
so my life wouldn’t be wasted, it saved me
that’s why me and Jay-19 retaliates it,
by doin’ the same and praise it,
raise it to the top within the Northern Lights
It’s Hip-Hop, so our countries will be modernized,
I’m talking about Sweden and Norway, right
I fight for us, but not for cash
And even if I turn to trash
I will never turn into another Wayne Fag,
And ruin the main rap, and turn it into just plain crap.
So Jay-19 and me are fighting to keep this real
that created and still is creatin’ the rap. It’ gave us strenght
Now we’re paying it back, with the message we just sent

[Chorus]

it never get old, then we know, that it's hip-hop
if it got soul, then we hope, that it don't stop
if we get cold, we go home, to our own block
back to the lab, close the door and return hot

it never get old, then we know, that it's hip-hop
if it got soul, then we hope, that it don't stop
if we get cold, we go home, to our own block
back to the lab, close the door and return hot




ps: I know he kills me lol .. :happy:
Last edited by SajN on Sep 9th, '08, 11:39, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby SajN » Sep 9th, '08, 11:38

Yeah thanks Chet :worship:

How does my voice scare you? In a negative way? :unsure:
And how did "masterpiece" give you chill ? lol

But thanks man, glad u liked it :y: :worship:

Put it in your mp3 :angry:
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 9th, '08, 11:45

Thank you Chet, really glad you liked it! :happy:
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby SajN » Sep 9th, '08, 11:46

Chet wrote:No not in a negative way, just your voice was scary. made me think of a mad scientist

And you were extra scary saying masterpiece. Your the boogie man of rap :worship:

No problem man, and I've already downloaded it :smoking:

Cool Cool :smoking:
I didn't expect my voice to give you a heart failure :sweating:
lol

Thanks again!
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 9th, '08, 13:20

yeah i love the hook...sick job on that jay :worship:
lyrics and flow was allright too.....
SajN defo an improvement...finally u started to speak up a lil bit more :) :y:
lyrics were good too
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby Hadez » Sep 9th, '08, 13:58

it was ok. i would work on the delivery in future tracks. annunciation too. it's a good beat tho.
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby SajN » Sep 9th, '08, 14:39

Thanks to both of ya :worship:
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 9th, '08, 14:51

Thanks for the feedback dudes! :worship:
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby Xray » Sep 9th, '08, 15:07

Jay-19 - loved the style of spitting. flow was pretty good, delivery was sweet, i like the way your laid back but you mean what you say, so props on that. great lyrics.

Hook - it sounded very empty, i think you should of at least had 2 other overlays, would of made it sound more raw and cool. lyrics and flow was good though.

Sajn - didn't like your verse at all, it was like listening to gibberish. didn't understand a word you said, nor did i like the flow or delivery, was just a wack verse IMO. lyrics Im not gonna judge cause there old.

Beat - crazy find shit was dope.

Good Collaboration Or Not - a very bad collab cause Sajn your not on Jay-19's level, and your a beginner. so i think that's just sad seeing you collaborate with someone heaps better than you.

Now that's complete honesty, so no hate. but keep doing your thing man, and you'll improve. best of luck. :y:

Oh i forgot, C-riz you done a magnificent job bro for real awesome mixing :y:
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 9th, '08, 15:14

Thanks for the feed Xray. :smoking:
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby SajN » Sep 9th, '08, 15:18

Thanks thanks..
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby Tash8 » Sep 9th, '08, 16:25

Hadez wrote:it was ok. i would work on the delivery in future tracks. annunciation too. it's a good beat tho.


plus mixing on hook was horrible.
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby Speech » Sep 9th, '08, 21:02

i liked the beat yo

jay19...you had a nice flow and emotions were there but it didn really knock me off my chair, sorry...i mean it was all good but i was missing something, can't tell you what, hook was something i was feeling tho :y:

Sajn...uhm...you have an extreme accent...dont hate on it but it made it hard as fuck to understand...you mumble a little too, or is it just me?
track was worth listening tho, nice joint
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 9th, '08, 21:58

Thanks for the feed Speech. I'll knock you off the chair next track, you'll see :smoking:
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Re: [NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

Postby <Stiiccy> » Sep 10th, '08, 01:06

1st guy, flow wasnt good at all...it got annoying quick...delivery was ok tho it could be a hell of alot better, lyrics were just ok nothing mind blowing...pronnunciation was bad...

2nd guy, voice was annoying, pronunciation was horrible, and that ruined your flow, again lyrics were just average...

hook was the best part of this song ... great job on that :y:

the vocals had a lil to much wetness in them and needed a lil more bass

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