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Im Not Fine PmT (Vettori/Nef) (Leave feed :)

Postby Vettori » Sep 9th, '08, 19:38

http://www.Myspace.com/VettoriMusic
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and for those afraid of myspace :o

http://www.zshare.net/audio/18477145b85722dc/ :P j/k

Leave some feed this track was so sick to record

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Who shocked ya, The day you heard my style in a video
You tried to turn your shitty flow, I brought it through ur city
Shown everybody with me, How simply i rap whats in me
Half a century has passed and im back Theres no touchin me
I lack a few pennys, Still Attatched to bein broke
No where to crash Hidin my stash it gets bad when i Need a smoke
I make the best with what i got, a couple dollars go on Pot
No one around me seems to notice Nothin bothers me alot.
Cause i try to get along, Weather it bothers me or not
Sometimes alot seems to be open, when it otta be a locked
Sometimes the Gun ends up in motion and it auta be cocked
Sometimes its gonna take revenge someone has gotta be taught
There is a time and theres a place but theres no lyin to my face
I See my future Playin out already Eyein my estate
My crew behind all of my weight, When Combined We are a Stage
Our assignment To get signed and apply for those brighter days

Im not fine by the way, Im so confined In this dream
I aint alive to survive we always fly as a team
Mass works better, Our backs they hurt never
We attract and react Our tasks we do better

im not fine by the way, Im so confined In this dream
I aint alive to survive we always fly as a team
Mass works better, Our backs they hurt never
Weve been livin in the cracks We deserve a stack better

I've been pushed and shoved, budged its worsen's up.
Ambushed and jumped, crushed a persons luck.
Stood tall inside, still this curse is fucked.
Livin in a verse, im stuck, my words errupt.
I've had enough, now im drivin, into madness tough.
To lose everyone i've loved, hearts turned to mush.
Myself alone, nobody home, burn the crutch.
And everything i've ever needed, i'll have earned to touch.
Learned its rough, when dealin with a life that sucks.
Observed the lust, revealing what i thought was shut.
But, when, the beat stops, i can turn on music.
No longer, my feet, they cannot refuse it.
Pondered, and waited, i will not lose this.
Grow stronger, the scars hurt, more than bruises.
Flow onward, take haste, who arrives late, losses.
Flip a coin, two faced, we can wait, fate chooses.
Last edited by Vettori on Sep 9th, '08, 21:22, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Im Not Fine PmT (Vettori/Nef) (Leave feed :)

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 9th, '08, 19:42

Pretty sick man. Your verse was pretty dope, and the flow was sick as usual.

Good track man, put out another new single though!
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Re: Im Not Fine PmT (Vettori/Nef) (Leave feed :)

Postby Xray » Sep 9th, '08, 19:46

RELAX THE FUCK OUT! :o

haha had to say that, cause the energy was above the roof. sick fucking song, fucking geniuses.

beat is fucking heroic, where the fuck do you get these beats from? crazy find.

loved the track...only thing i can say is at first time hearing the chorus i didn't realize it. doesn't sound much like a chorus but shits fire anyways. you over done it with the play the chorus 4 times at the end lol was annoying. other than that SICK! with a fucking capital S :worship:
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Re: Im Not Fine PmT (Vettori/Nef) (Leave feed :)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 9th, '08, 20:18

for the most of this its dope, i like the idea on the hook "im not fine by the way im so confined" i jsut couldnt make out some parts after that is it "in the stream" or "in the industry". ill blame the quality for that coz its not as good as before but i still enjoy the track.


your flow all over was solid, i wasnt feelign the start of nef's verse but when he got goin is was great, one line made me laugh though " but when the beat stops i can turn on music" lol


overall was good some really nice moments in the lyrics, cant be bothered goin through and quoting them all but i enjoyed the track, wasnt loving the beat but you guys made it work and the hook was dope.


jsut get back to pro quality :p
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Postby Vettori » Sep 9th, '08, 20:21

Thanks man :)
I appreciate all the feed...Ye i guess its about time for a single huh :b:
Ill start workin on it
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Postby Jay-19 » Sep 9th, '08, 20:42

Someone ring the fire-alarm! :o

This track is hot! Beat is one of those beats I'd search the whole web for. And the delivery on it is awesome. Always with you guys, the flow is off the hook and the lyrics are always satisfying. Crazy good track guys!

Keep it up!
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Postby Speech » Sep 9th, '08, 20:55

idk why everybody so wild about this beat...just isn my type..too hard banging..but that doesn mess up the song, cuz you deliver just perfect on it, both of you....hmm can't give much feed cuz i ejoy your tracks...wouldn know what to tell ya...keep it up exactly that way :y:
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Postby Tash8 » Sep 9th, '08, 21:17

hmm this is a decent song for you guys... I liked Nef's verse, vett your first verse was a bit hard for me to get into but as i listened it got dope

beat is decent, like it's dope just not my type..

hook was awesome... keep it up, now u need new quality.
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Postby Vettori » Sep 9th, '08, 21:19

:D thanks, Yea the beat reminded me of some terminator type shit...But i liked the verse spots... so i wrote to it...Ill post the lyrics cause the quality lacks
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Postby B.A.D. » Sep 9th, '08, 22:03

beat comes in real nice, I like it :y:

my fuckin computer is slow as fuck, so its hard to listen cuz all this pause interruptions

k, lyrics are amazing, I can relate 110% on them, I love them

"Cause i try to get along, Weather it bothers me or not
Sometimes alot seems to be open, when it otta be a locked"

beautiful!!... I loved that

hook: could use some more touches to it, sounds too empty, lyrics are great tho on it

sorry, I couldn't get to verse 2 due to this slowness on my computer, which I hated cuz I really wanted to listen...

but, I'll try on another computer and continue the feed :y:
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Postby <VerbalTouch> » Sep 10th, '08, 03:20

i want this beat :worship:
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Postby enjinn » Sep 10th, '08, 08:00

you had dope energy on this...really feeling the flow...got me all hyped!
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 10th, '08, 10:17

yeah beat is fuckin hektik...
lyrics are decent as fuck..cant complain
mixing :worship:
hook is kool too...well the beat is hektik...flow is hektik...delievery is hektik....9.6/10 :8)
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Re: Im Not Fine PmT (Vettori/Nef) (Leave feed :)

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 10th, '08, 12:56

sorrie for the delay
dude that shit is unbeliveable,first time i listened continuosly to the beat-sick :y:
second time i focused on the lyrics,flow,rhymth,style and accent..-by far one of the best without a doubt :b: :smoking:
third time was just cause the song in itself is off the chain!!!! :worship: :worship:
ask around i rarely download member audios,your shit was just worth that :y: :y: :flower:
sick stuff and thnx for the heads up :shifty:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Sep 11th, '08, 17:32

dunno if its the overlays but sounds like you piece your verse together.

Like spit two sentences and stop.Then the next two...etc

dunno but how it sounds.

Good track but not ya best.
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