[zs]NEW!Profaz-Tavo Rytojus

by **Big Proof 4ever** » Sep 14th, '08, 15:02

here we go again :smoking:

finished new track called tavo rytojus(morrow belongs for u)check it and leave some feedback :flower:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/187586935969a9ea/

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Sep 14th, '08, 15:17

thatz a sick one....defo an improvement... :happy:

still cant understand shit...hook could be a lil more fluently...but still decent
verse are okay...flow wise :8)

good track man... :b:

by **Big Proof 4ever** » Sep 14th, '08, 15:21

ill buy a dictionary for ya twinnie,so u cud understand shit :smoking:

and propz for feedback,it helps alot to improve shit :worship:

by **enjinn** » Sep 14th, '08, 16:40

you got good energy anf low...just wish i knew what you were saying

by **Big Proof 4ever** » Sep 14th, '08, 16:53

enjinn wrote:you got good energy anf low...just wish i knew what you were saying

sends dictionary

and thanks for feedback :worship:

by **Xray** » Sep 15th, '08, 17:52

crazy beat...chorus is out of flow....verses are fucking dope flow is dope...but its out of beat imo...maybe if you put the vocals alil back...cause sounds like you trynna flow to the snare but always delayed...anyways thats what i think...good track keep it up

by **Big Proof 4ever** » Sep 15th, '08, 18:00

thanks bro :worship:

agree about hook :sweating:

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