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[CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

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[CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Kez » Sep 15th, '08, 19:27

Well i made this track a few months back, hence the URD references; i was planning to have it as a track close to the end. But with the URD references i've decided it's too out-dated to go on the tape, so i've canned it. But i thought i might as well release it :smoking:

Listen to "Are Ya Sick Yet?" on Zshare
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What's going on with me:

I haven't been very active in terms of songs for several reasons.
First i've been trying to make Universal II while also juggling The Most Annoying II. Ironic that it's almost been a year since Universal was finished and i have no songs at all done for it.
Second i've been getting a bit de-motivated at times, fed up of my shit mic, been busy with life, college etc...
Soo i can't promise anything for a while. The Most Annoying II is certainly gonna be finished by the end of this year, but in terms of my next solo tape it's gonna be a long fuckin time.
So (that's if you care) this will have to tide you over :p

Some explanations:
Some people might misinterpret a few things, so..

1) The This Means War and Raid Time lines at the end of the first verse are just mentions, not a diss
2) After "brick in the ground" it's "fuck the wall", not "fuck The War". The line itself is a reference to Pink Floyd's Brick in the Wall track.
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Kez » Sep 15th, '08, 19:45

Killa wrote:Kez is on some subliminal "fuck the war" shit.......smh epecially seen as im actually sick you fuckhole!!!!!!!


I'm bringing the War down from the inside :shifty:
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 15th, '08, 19:57

:o attack at RTI?
but the flow is sick :y: hook is kool...
quality..oh well...doesnt bother me anymore lol
singin was kinda kool actually :unsure:
decent track man :y:
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Tornado » Sep 16th, '08, 17:10

in all honestly thats the best song i've heard from you so yet (though i haven't heard Universal)
in the siging part in the second part of the verse, it shoudve been louder or something, and beat is nothing special but pretty good track espically chorus
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Kez » Sep 16th, '08, 17:29

Tornado wrote:in all honestly thats the best song i've heard from you so yet (though i haven't heard Universal)
in the siging part in the second part of the verse, it shoudve been louder or something, and beat is nothing special but pretty good track espically chorus


I was gonna make it louder but i decided to keep it low so it was just a small touch you may or may not notice. Didn't wanna make it stand out too much in case it didnt sound right.

And you should check Universal it's definately in my top 5 best.
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby enjinn » Sep 17th, '08, 08:03

dope!...im feeling your delivery...good lyrics too...you sound like someone i used to know :flower:
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Kez » Sep 17th, '08, 22:47

Thanks all :b:

@Chris: Of course it's not an attack, they're shout outs :sweating:

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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 18th, '08, 01:26

I've hurd this track before

nice to hear you still alive hahaha

I like this track a lot, the beat doesn't loves me that much but works fine

quality is good for me

anyways

ya'll hurd it THE MOST ANNOYING pt.2 is coming right after the release of THE SECRET 08'

stay tunned... first single droping next week
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Speech » Sep 18th, '08, 08:31

i'm a motherfucker? :o .....wait a sec...you right with that :worship: :shifty:

i liked this track..but good thing you explained the rti and urd and tms parts cuz the quality made some stuff hard to understand and all i got is : "all the motherfuckers in raid time" <---(or something like that)
delivery is good as always...even tho your concepts are similar you manage to make an individual track... i liked the hook and how you built it, plus the "are you sick yet" in each verse, it's cool....i like the part where you say that "are you sick yet" is really a question and doesnt have to be answered with "no"..that makes it diff. from a typical eminem concept where the answers supposed to be "yes"

good one keep it up
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Kez » Sep 18th, '08, 16:43

^ Yeah i didn't use the word motherfuckers in a derogatory way, it was just a way of shoutin you all out :b:
Thanks Speech and Ax :b:
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby SajN » Sep 18th, '08, 17:26

Nice track :y:

Nice lyrics and flow!

Hook is cool :y:

I liked the 2nd verse

and beat was good.


Nice job :y:

And I'm not sick yet :p
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 18th, '08, 20:09

No disrespect, but your accent kinda ruins the song a bit.

Still it's a hot song, except that little accent thing. You got some hot lyrics. But it seems like you kinda rush some of the lines. Hook is cool.

I can't believe how much you developed from the first track I heard by you, it's an insane change. Good work man!
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 18th, '08, 20:37

your flow aint as tight as it is now but its good :y:


lyrics = sick, chorus = good, delivery = no problems i enjoyed it


overall a strong track its just not as good as you are now imo
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby DelinQuent » Sep 18th, '08, 22:43

damn, thought i fed this already... guess not

i was really into this. flow was great, loved the "are ya sick yet" thrown in thru the verse.

the hook was also good. i liked it, more emotion would have greatly inscreased this.

overall, i love it, and if this got scrapped, i cant wait to hear the real material :y:
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Re: [CANNED KEZ TRACK] Are Ya Sick Yet?

Postby Xray » Sep 19th, '08, 11:37

if you recorded that track with a condenser mic....and mixed it well...would of been a great song...so im saying the flow the delivery lyrics...all on point and good. so this is a great practice song till you get your gear set than its pop up time...good shit :y:

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