Ice Killa- Lime Light (prod. by Big Ax-D)

[Requiem]

major propz to big ax-d on this one,

http://www.zshare.net/audio/19115852f6e16f11/

this is going to be the lead single to my upcoming LP. please comment opinions, etc. just don't diss the track, and i'll be happy; any tips for future tracks i do would be helpful too.

The Ice Killa LP, it's coming......

[Solace]

if the topic in creative writing isnt done, how could you have finished the track?

ps. dling right now

gunna be ill.

edit: Review:


Beat: Very nice, very very nice. It's cool you got Big Ax-D to produce it.
Lyrics: Pretty good to me man.
Overall: 4/5

Reason it didnt get full credit was cause it wasnt like best audio quality, but i know thats same with me but if it was like a studio track it would be sick.

[Big Proof 4ever]

beat crazy great job ax i defo feel ur lyrics man,good flow,dont like hook pretty weak for me,and quality wasnt best,overall its good song worth to listen no doubt

[Requiem]

big proof, and shadymademe, thx for commenting i kno quallity isn't best, but it's what i got to work with. glad ya'll both feel the lyrics, motivates me to keep making tracks.
again, thanks to big ax for the beat.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

who mixed this?...
flow is actually pretty good man the ryhming sounds forced...dunno
beat wasnt mind blowing sorry ax...

[Requiem]

who mixed this?...
flow is actually pretty good man the ryhming sounds forced...dunno
beat wasnt mind blowing sorry ax...

big ax mixed it. and it's really hard to flow fast, and go hard, and worry about delivery, with a million multies in the lines. but i think i did it pretty well for how complicated it was

thx for commenting tho

[Raf Remix]

enjoyed the beat. the rapping is decent. u got skill..keep grindin and learnin yr craft...

peace

[Kez]

This could have been a good flow but it basically sounds like you just reading straight through with a beat in the background.

Lyrics were actually pretty good. Delivery was alright at a few times but for the most part it just didn't immerse me.

Hook also just sounded like you read straight through and finished early so repeated your last line again.

So basically you need practice, but you got some good lyrics. If you work on your flow and delivery you definately got potential.

[SajN]

I basically agree with everything Kez said.

Delivery wasn't there, flow was aight. Lyrics were good

And the hook didn't feel like hook

But just practise with passion, and you'll improve


And I didn't feel the beat.. it sounded empty or something .. idk...

[Requiem]

thx for the suggestions ^ i'll definitely work on it. i mean, i'm just starting out, and experimenting with my lyrics. i'll work on that delivery thing.

[enjinn]

beat is dope...i like your voice...you had some sick lyrics and flow...real nice

[DelinQuent]

beat is decent, nothing amazing

you sound bored, so i'm bored while listening to this.

hook is weak. unlike any other voice in this twilight? what?

youre rhyming just for the same of rhymes "beat politicians into submission" so many lines that have zero to do with anything. disappearing faster than an apparition, no offense, but this shit is just corny. shock you like an electrician....

overall, i had zero enjoyment while listening to this. my tip would be to focus on writing songs, not writing bars. keep working, there's definite potential, but you're not quite there yet

[Solace]

^^ Yeah since you said your gunna work on flow and since this is for your LP, it should be an amazing track thats relistenable. I suggest you re-record this until you got good delivey, and also change some lyrics you think you could replace with better ones.

Dont worry ,itll all work out

[Requiem]

i guess i could re-record it. throw some emotion into it. i don't think i'll change any lyrics tho, cuz the song's whole point is to show my style by having a million multies
thx for everyone's opinion, i'm always working to get better

[Tash8]

mixing was awful, beat was nice but i it needs more... drums got boring fast

your flow is alright, it seems like your reading off your paper...

don't do that.

also

height, fight, light, kite, highlight, twilight

tell me what the hell are you rhyming

ight, ight, ight, ight, ight aren't rhymes, they are the same things.

opposition, composition, aquestion, intermission, again ur rhyming is awful.

keep it up