,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:honestly one of the best tracks released on this forum
love the beat the drums are raw as fuck, the hooks is awesome vocals have great pressence, your flow is awesome and lyrics are solid all through out and its a well done concept.
sick track man
thank you man, glad you enjoyed the song
SiiNiDE wrote:Since I failed to leave feed on your last album, I'll feed this and your LP when it comes out..
The concept / beat sounds like a spoonfull song. (If you guys know who he is.)
The verses / lyrics were done well. It's not lyrical in the slightest, but people often times think that every song has to be lyrical for it to be good--Not true. The concept was done well, as bar said.
My only problem was your voice sounding the same through out the whole song. Like, there were parts I felt could've have ALOT more emphasis on them. I hope I said that right. It's kinda weird, I guess.. You have mic presence and emotion, but the emotion itself seems monotone... Like one emotion through out the whole song, ya feel? That's the only part I disliked, other than that I thought it was a good song.. Could've been longer.
Nice shit, keep it up.
thanks for the breakdown bro, appreciate your honesty. agree with most of what you said except the "could've been longer" cause its already 4 minutes long, and i feel its long enough. good looking
so i can use all the hype i can get. 
