emotional track on dead presidents beat

[enjinn]

i did this collab a while ago...i go first then rhawax...comments are much appreciated...thanks!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/19727118a67e43c7/

[Boston]

well to be honest, the qualtiy isnt that good, lyrics sound straight and the flow is nice and on points for most part. and the 2nd verse is pretty damn nice to, im enjoying that. i just cant understand everything your saying man. i mean you might want to paste the lyrics or something but from what i did hear it wasnt bad

if you dont mind, feed my new track Make It

[<Stiiccy>]

your voice is preety different...
nice laid back shit
lyrics are nothing special...they did the job i guess..
delivery was ok

nothing incredible
you can do better

[enjinn]

word...this is an old track...thanks for the comments!

[Mc Cubz]

I quite like this track even though it hasn't received much feed.

I felt it was attacked quite well with decent delivery.

the sound quality wasn't great but you know - if thats due to the equipment you have access to that shouldn't be too much of a problem.

[enjinn]

thanks a lot Cubz!

[randomghost]

nice track..i enjoyed listening...quality could be better...flow is good...delivery is ok..keep it up man

[Speech]

i gotta admit i admire your verse quality wise yo...some great deep shit that explains how alotta ppl feel, but never put to pad....ace..second guy's quality was much better and his lyrics lived up to yours too...lol i thought it was the hook first and i was amazed by how your quality and pronnounciation changed but haha its al good...track was enjoyable..work on the quality somehow and your be more than good

[enjinn]

randomghost, Speech...thanks a lot for the comments!!!