Song I recorded

by **<VerbalTouch>** » Oct 8th, '08, 21:25

Stop posting old shit :angry:

by **<VerbalTouch>** » Oct 8th, '08, 21:40

sorry sir

the intro needs to be louder on thetrack but very hot

can i remix this?

by **B.A.D.** » Oct 8th, '08, 21:45

hahahah loved the lyrics

pretti impresive

shame its old and not a full song

nice concept btw

by **dbeauluvswomen** » Oct 8th, '08, 21:59

haa at the dora line
i liked it :y:

by **enjinn** » Oct 9th, '08, 00:57

"I'm a two inch pair of tits, never getting attention"

^^ hahahhaahah!!!...dope...i loved the flow and delivery in this...pretty sick if this is old shit

by **neversnooze** » Oct 9th, '08, 14:15

this sounded like production by mart85 anyways this was a nice track too bad its short :y:

by **Hadez** » Oct 9th, '08, 22:46

good stuff. like somebody else said the Dora line was great :y:

by **Xray** » Oct 10th, '08, 01:55

lyrics = dude your losing it.
flow = was ok but ive heard better from you
delivery = as usual, its delivered like a box of pizza with condoms inside the box instead.
overall = its not bad, but your definitely losing it.

PS: LMAO! take that mafucker BERATTTTTT!

naa playing man. good shit. like hearing what ppl was 2 years ago :smoking:

by **Speech** » Oct 10th, '08, 08:13

good shit good shit...hmm since you don mind feedback..i won give deep one....just...good shit :y:

by **yoshi** » Oct 10th, '08, 19:12

you should re-record it.

:heart:

im sooo puttin it on my mp3^^

by **Xray** » Oct 11th, '08, 01:51

McMaybe wrote:
Xray wrote:lyrics = dude your losing it.
flow = was ok but ive heard better from you
delivery = as usual, its delivered like a box of pizza with condoms inside the box instead.
overall = its not bad, but your definitely losing it.

PS: LMAO! take that mafucker BERATTTTTT!

naa playing man. good shit. like hearing what ppl was 2 years ago

I was wondering like, how am I losing it if the tracks almost 2 years old, rofl... Then I see the just playing, you asshole.

and yo for real what do i have to do to hear a "NEW RECORDED" song? fuck ima hire a couple giant Australian's strapped. they'll pay you a visit with pink tank tops and pink thongs, water pistols, drive by your place using a grocery trolley. with a brand new microphone!! for fucks sake open the door my people don't wanna get there tank tops dirty

by **Tornado** » Oct 11th, '08, 15:02

sick old shit but goddamm your becoming like eminem..no new shit..Tr needs you

by **<VerbalTouch>** » Oct 11th, '08, 15:26

Tornado wrote:sick old shit but goddamm your becoming like eminem..no new shit..Tr needs you

mcmaybe > Eminem

by **<VerbalTouch>** » Oct 12th, '08, 01:16

So every time I try to rhyme and take over your minds,
I try to take over your brains, manipulate it like its mine!
I try to make you buy my music, I'm aware that it sucks...
so bare with me... God dammit I know that I'm fucked.

you missed a word in your lyrics :angry:

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