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New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby wesjp2011 » Oct 19th, '08, 22:23

What up ppl...
I'm somewhat new to trshady
But anyways im a rapper and i got a new single..
hope u like it.. tell me what u think, it would be appreciated :y:

Title: Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)
Artist: Wes P
Album: A Lifelong Story

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Re: New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby Requiem » Oct 19th, '08, 22:38

good 2 see some enthusiastic people on tr.

you got really good flow, and u work on the beat pretty good. ur lyrics are pretty good too, but the mic quality kind of ruins it somewhat.
i don't like the chorus too much, but the verses are great. the beat's good during the verses, again, i don't like hook.

u got alot of potential, but u need to work on hooks. :8) i'm up for a collab sometime if u wanna. i got plenty of extra beats for u to record too :y:
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Re: New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby wesjp2011 » Oct 19th, '08, 22:48

IceKilla wrote:good 2 see some enthusiastic people on tr.

you got really good flow, and u work on the beat pretty good. ur lyrics are pretty good too, but the mic quality kind of ruins it somewhat.
i don't like the chorus too much, but the verses are great. the beat's good during the verses, again, i don't like hook.

u got alot of potential, but u need to work on hooks. :8) i'm up for a collab sometime if u wanna. i got plenty of extra beats for u to record too :y:



Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.
And yeah if u wanna collab thats good with me and thanks i need some beats :)
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Re: New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby Requiem » Oct 19th, '08, 23:05

^sweet, i'll pm u a beat sometime tonight. :8)
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Re: New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby wesjp2011 » Oct 19th, '08, 23:26

IceKilla wrote:^sweet, i'll pm u a beat sometime tonight. :8)


sounds good :worship:
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Re: New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby Emadyville » Oct 20th, '08, 00:32

That was interesting, very different style, i like the uniqueness of your flow, rhymes, and content. It's good to see that. Overall I enjoyed the song. :y:
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Re: New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby wesjp2011 » Oct 20th, '08, 00:48

Emadyville wrote:That was interesting, very different style, i like the uniqueness of your flow, rhymes, and content. It's good to see that. Overall I enjoyed the song. :y:



thanks. :D
good to know, uniqueness is good
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Re: New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 20th, '08, 03:04

hahaha strange flow but works well

very very diferent stuff, sounds real undergroundish, I liked it kind of, still needs a bit of practice.

second verse was interesting

defo lookin forward to more stuff of you

I liked your style
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Re: New Song - "Hey Hey Hey (Somethin 2 Say)"

Postby preest » Oct 21st, '08, 12:34

I think it's ok, I think the hook can need a bit more "grrrr" but its nice, sounds well nice! I dont really see this as a single more of an album filler I think, lyrics aint bad, flows quite nice, beats nice, mic presence is a bit off, if the mic presance was there, this could be ALOT better!!

could be well nice

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