by Xray » Nov 11th, '08, 08:12
You need some work, but your flow is pretty good atm, it'll be much better as time goes by. Definitely have potential to make some classics. Lyrics were pretty good, delivery was good but you need to work on your breathing. I liked it man, keep it up.
PS: I lol'd when you said "fuck Romeo and Juliet mayne", I don't know why, maybe cause you said mayne haha.
Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet goneNew Track: The Nightmare