New Track i Recorded...

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

so heres the scoop... i havent recorded shit in 6-7 monthes and have been writing endlessly since then. i feel ive gotten a lil better. my new track i just laced lastnight is called REMEMBER ME (WHERE WAS YOU AT) and basically i grew up with a kid who backstabbed me over and over and now he can licked the sweat on my balls so i recorded a diss track about him and some people are about to let it leak around myspace and hopefully around our way in north Atlanta. i moved up to Detroit, mi. like 4 1/2 monthes ago or so to get a way but now im ready to start releasing a lot of shit. hopefully it works out. hope you like the track, its only like 3 min. long so if you have a chance leave some feedback on what you thought...
http://www.imeem.com/people/50KznKX/mus ... you_atwav/

oh and heres another track i recorded like 10 monthes ago that i threw on there (imeem) called THE SAME SHIT. check it out homie. its when i started out basically...
http://www.imeem.com/people/50KznKX/mus ... e_shitwav/

-lil jimmy.

[DelinQuent]

you sound very young.

flow is off, rhyming is kinda weak but i guess it does the job. "cause i dont wrestle, shit i'll knock you the fuck out"... eminem?

overall, wasnt really into it, your flow kept coming and going. delivery was decent, but lyrics and flow need work. there's potential here. just a little work and it'll start to show

Look out for my Mixtape on November 20th entitled "Sincerely Yours"

[B.A.D.]

hmm, k, since youre begginer I won't go hard

first off you gotta fix your flow big time, that is done with practice so don't worry, at first I suggest you try to match the snare

for a strange reason your quality is good even tho the track isn't mastered. so propz on that, u must have a nice mic

Lyrcs need a LOT of works, it is too basic, even for a diss, or maybe specially for a Diss lol

Delivery is excelent, keep it like that

flow gets fixed through out the song but goes back to bad again... so just practice it

good shit, needs work, too eminemish and I cought several lines from him, maybe you didn't copied them but his style is there. so first find your style, thats important.

this will be an interesting evolution, holla at me when you upload more tracks

btw: Chek out "THE SECRET 08" now available for download

[Call Me Pik]

you sound very young.

flow is off, rhyming is kinda weak but i guess it does the job. "cause i dont wrestle, shit i'll knock you the fuck out"... eminem?

overall, wasnt really into it, your flow kept coming and going. delivery was decent, but lyrics and flow need work. there's potential here. just a little work and it'll start to show

def agree keep it up

[stevethetruth]

music kinda over powers your voice and it's hard to hear what you are saying, i like the beat and the flow sounds pretty good

[Solace]

Checked out Remember Me.

Music was too loud, put up the vocals. And yeah, biting Eminem Nice quality tho. Voice is young, like mine, just so you know. Delivery and flow were fine to me, cept hte chorus. The chorus was weak, when you say Remember Me? you should kinda yell it. Wasnt into it, keep it up, use your own beats too

[Darkblade44431]

The second song wouldn't play, but as far as the first one :
i would say, work on your voice some if you can, work on your flow and lyrics, and be a bit louder and work with delivery. Beat was cool, is it like a "Hit em Up" alter or something? anyway, keep it up. btw, i'm always up for a collab if you want, even if ur not making an album, can just do some shit together
keep at it though, man.

[Solace]

the beat was Hit Em Up 2's (the one that Eminem & D12 did)^^