"It's A Shame" NEW SONG

by **Emadyville** » Nov 26th, '08, 06:31

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

Such a shame this game has played me softly,
My pen is sick, all it ever does is cough-see,
I’m viewed as soft, but in truth I’m cocky,
You’re fucking with the best and you can’t top-me,
I am the shit, no asshole can stop me
My second verse alone puts me in the top three,
My choice of words will take away this preconceived,
Shit I can’t believe he just said that I can’t breathe,
Well good for you pussies, cause I can’t leave,
More reps with this pen it’ll be like me with no sleeves,
This goddamn verse is such a breathe of fresh air,
I’m making my point why I’m the fucking best here,
The truth of it all, I don’t know if the rest care,
But these songs just got so much shit off of my chest there,
You’d swear I was shirtless as I was writing each verse,
But the point was made, so someone just test me first,

I’m patiently waiting it’s cocked, locked, n loaded,
At the top of my game that’s why I’ve not got demoted,
So much fire you have just stop, dropped, exploded,
My ammo’s in the words so it’s shot shot reload-it,
This mind never runs out my arsenals forever,
Only a part-of-yous clever, so start-a-feud never,
With this individual, remember that’s critical,
Every words just symbols that creates a visual,
An intrical form of rap put into it’s physical,
Broken down from sounds you hear in each syllable,
Now you know why it takes a smart man to grasp it,
Better practice rhyming or it’s a lyrical ass kick,
So to fire at me you’d need a strike to match-it,
I’m already ignited, so when I strike the match-lit,
With the pen in one hand one middle finger stuck up,
Just waiting at my desk for you pussies to fuck up…

by **AspirinE** » Nov 26th, '08, 11:08

I like it, got beat flow, lines are nice...

Dont mind if i recommend u something on the mixing..

Try recording three layer tracks

Main track 15% left speaker pan. (mono)
Dub track 25% right speaker pan but with at least 15% least volume (mono)
Effects track 10% left pan (stereeo)

gives much more clarity and lets u hear the beat better.

one more thing u can do is, wen mixing save ur beats in 24 bit depth instead of 16 or 32 ur beat has more space for vocals like that

by **Emadyville** » Nov 26th, '08, 16:13

Thanks a lot for the feed and the advice :y:

by **MC Anonymous** » Nov 26th, '08, 16:59

Emadyville wrote:Thanks a lot for the feed and the advice

This song was awesome. The lyrics are sick, the flow was on point also.
I would give this a 9/10 only cause' I think you could put more emotion into it.
Good job! :y:

by **Emadyville** » Nov 26th, '08, 17:19

Thanks for the feed anonymous and Chet Starrrrrr.

Yeah and Chet, I felt like i had to, I reached the point where I got to defend myself and let people know how I really feel. Glad you guys liked it.

by **mcZu** » Nov 26th, '08, 19:30

Nice song, I liked it
Great lyrics, flow was great, delivery could be a bit better ( I dunno, maybe it's just me )
The intro was sick
Overall a great track :y:

by **Emadyville** » Nov 26th, '08, 20:00

Thanks for checking and feeding it man, much appreciated.

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Nov 26th, '08, 20:08

good listen....good solid track...no real complains...
maybe quality and delievery could be improved...but hey..there's always room for improvement..

but lyrics and flow were good

by **Jay-19** » Nov 26th, '08, 20:24

Awesome track dude!
This shit gets me pumped up for real!

Flow was top notch, rhyming were sick, delivery was flawless!
Damn, fucking great track man!

10/10 :worship:

by **Emadyville** » Nov 27th, '08, 01:36

Thanks killah and chris for checking it, thanks for the feed!

by **Robbie G** » Nov 27th, '08, 04:01

That was dope man, loved the beat and sample.

Something seems a little weird about it though, maybe the mixing?

Anyways nice job. :y:

by **Emadyville** » Nov 27th, '08, 04:47

Shady Babie wrote:That was dope man, loved the beat and sample.

Something seems a little weird about it though, maybe the mixing?

Anyways nice job.

Thanks for the feed!

by **Xray** » Nov 27th, '08, 07:27

Flow, lyrics, delivery all dope. Mixing again was just boring as hell. Like I said in your other thread work on your mixing more, and good beat main instrument is a bit to loud though, dope pattern though. Liked it. :y:

by **Emadyville** » Nov 27th, '08, 07:37

Xray wrote:Flow, lyrics, delivery all dope. Mixing again was just boring as hell. Like I said in your other thread work on your mixing more, and good beat main instrument is a bit to loud though, dope pattern though. Liked it.

Thanks a lot for checking it man, I appreciate it, and thanks for the advice man I appreciate that as well.

by **<Stiiccy>** » Nov 27th, '08, 07:58

everything seems on point in this shit...

i dont really like the subject matter...

but its great man you have came a loooooooooooooooooooooooooong way bro

10/10 just because of your much needed improvements

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