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"LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Nov 27th, '08, 04:43

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Love will and did find a way to hurt me,
It’s not about love hear my words and see,
Loves a job so you’re working me,
I wasn’t a dick, why you jerking me,
No perks to see, I emerged in the,
Emergency for heart surgery,
And from it I’ve learned to breathe,
Learned to ease my concerns to see,
How perfectly, these words can be,
To ease any pain from her and see,
That currently, this courage be,
All I have left when I serve the beat,
So I picked myself up and moved on,
Put it all into this and I’m too strong,
To let one single person close,
The lights are out as the curtains close,
This outlet gave me the perfect dose,
It has served it’s full purpose so,
Love will happen with certain hoes,
That’s life fulfilled as the world goes,
I want every single girl to know,
I am the truth but these words are froze,
I have love to give but at times love kills,
Believe the hook because love will,
Separate me from the pack of dudes,
Who’s attitudes of that is rude,
And if I’ve pursued, after you,
I will open doors and say after you,
Stay with you in the afternoon,
When you’re sad I’ll bring laughter too,
I’m no actor you need to see it fits,
Love sucks…and life’s a bitch…


Why want you when you don’t want me back,
What on earth will I gain except pain from that,
I’ve been here before it’s the same exact,
Dame in fact, pain is back how insane is that,
It’s the same track playing inside my head,
I was being myself, my pride is dead,
I coulda cried and fled but I tried instead,
I sold my heart, my loves tied in debt,
With the last few but now I’m past you,
The truth just masked you and I asked you,
About me and you, you didn’t see it through,
It’s not easy to complete the move,
And just let it go, I haven’t let it go,
I don’t put all my chips on a bet and fold,
And right now I’m just more upset I sold,
Myself to the devil and I know it gets old,
But love is the pain that’s by my side,
It’s the hurt I feel and no longer hide,
I grew up from this with a stronger mind,
But the question remains am I on your mind,
Or am I done for now and just a memory,
I question now if you remember me,
This could be different as my temper be,
Hard to hold back when the rest of me,
Knows you took only the best of me,
Now I question what you sent to me,
What you said to me, in your texts I see,
Too much to wonder and especially,
The fact I took this to the nth degree,
I learned that love won’t bring ecstasy,
Love will be hard to find I’ll stress it,
Love will come I’ll just wait for the next bitch..
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 27th, '08, 04:44

10/10.
You don't know how much you've helped me with this track
bravo! :worship:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Nov 27th, '08, 04:45

MC Anonymous wrote:10/10.
You don't know how much you've helped me with this track
bravo! :worship:


Thanks bro, glad I helped.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Xray » Nov 27th, '08, 07:24

Damn that beat is hot as hell. Love that chorus sample, shits off the chain. Song was all good, flow was crazy, lyrics were tight, delivery was on point. Mixing was fucked up, which is why this song isn't as great as it would of been if you mixed it better.

Actually I don't even think you mixed the vocals did you? you just recorded and rendered the track? Need to step your mixing game up, cause if you added a compressor, EQ, and some other effects this would of been crazy, but still good track but not good enough.

Work on your mixing, and your tracks could be great.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Nov 27th, '08, 07:41

Thanks xray, I appreciate the feed man, I'm glad you noticed the flow, delivery, and lyrics, cause in the past my flow and delivery was weak, so i'm glad you commented on that. And for mixing I don't mix my shit, i know nothing about it, but I will try to improve my shit however i can, thanks again man.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 27th, '08, 07:52

dude flow is your best yet imo...

your delivery is getting there...

you still need some work but that will only come with work...

hot beat

mixing wasnt that great tho ehhh...

lyrics are great as usual...

your gettin better homie...keep workin :y: :y:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Nov 27th, '08, 08:13

Thanks sticcy, again, glad you saw the improvements, and they will get better man I'm working, there will be new songs for a few weeks and one in a few days so make sure to check that shit, thanks again bro.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby mcZu » Nov 27th, '08, 15:24

Great song man, full with emotion, lyrics were great
the beat gave me chills, it suited well with yout lyrics.
Delivery and flow were nice, can't say much about the mixing,
but it deffintly could be better.

Overall a sick song, really enjoyed listening to it :y:
Keep it up bro :b:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Nov 27th, '08, 18:09

^ Thanks man
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Nov 28th, '08, 05:10

McMaybe wrote:Pretty sick overall. I'd say the only thing you should work on is emotion/delivery. Flow was decent-good, lyrics were pretty good.

8.5/10


Means a lot man thanks for checking it.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Darkblade44431 » Dec 1st, '08, 00:47

nice job. good lyrics, flow, and beat :happy:
idk shit about mixing, so i can't say shit about that.
i don't have anything bad to say :y:
keep it up, dude.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Dec 1st, '08, 03:18

Darkblade44431 wrote:nice job. good lyrics, flow, and beat :happy:
idk shit about mixing, so i can't say shit about that.
i don't have anything bad to say :y:
keep it up, dude.


Thanks a lot for checking it and feeding much appreciated :y:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Dec 1st, '08, 19:15

cud u up it on zshare? :whistle:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Dec 1st, '08, 19:38

Big Proof 4ever wrote:cud u up it on zshare? :whistle:


Yes I will, liked it that much? I will by tomo sometime I'm slightly busy today. I'll prolly pm it to you.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Dec 1st, '08, 20:18

its not that i liked it that much sorry if i hurted ur feelings lol nahh im just kiddin i didnt even listen because my net is slow to listen shit online :D :D
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