NEW VERSE

[Darkblade44431]

Check this. But, first, it isn't it's best for two reasons. I hardly looked over the lyrics, and there was no way to make it sound good when i pulled away the mic, it actually sounded better closer, even if it was kinda high pitched, eh.. :/

Ok, well, comment please. It's just an acapella of a first verse to a song.

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LINK : http://www.zshare.net/audio/520804036f9c8648/

[Solace]

Nice flow and delivery. I like your voice. It wasnt that bad man, i liked it I wanna hear the whole thing, a couple verses on a nice beat. Seriously for me i woulda ran out of breath so fast, and youd be hearing my breathing and shit, so i give you props on that too. Keep it up

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

wasnt bad, i wanna hear the whole song with the beat but yea it was straight... are you a beginner? ive only been doin this for like 10 monthes on and off. im seriously down for a collab, i think it'll help me and you get better by workin with someone else and shit and helpin eachother out... so yeeeeeaaaaa lets spit.

[Darkblade44431]

ha, well i got no beat yet. And yeah, as soon as i can figure out a way to start up another first, i'll work on that. And, thanks for the comments, both of you.
And, Shady Capo, yeah, i'm a beginner, and that'd be cool, i think it'd help too, but if you could get me on a topic and a beat it'd be a hell of a lot easier XD, maybe we could take turns supplying the beat and topic and just make a couple, or bunch, w/e, tracks.

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

yea imma be really busy the next couple days with school papers but sounclick.com has a shit load of beats and i got some good ones ive been saving for a rainy day... if you come up with a topic soon tell me and ill tell you what i got soon too.... just when you have the time or w/e screw around in the instrumentals or beats section on soundclick.com and see if you find anything thats tight ya know.

[Darkblade44431]

will do, peace out, man.

[Attila]

hey tight verse when u get a beat if u want someone to collab with u id be up for it.
me and my crew just finished our first album and we just lookin for as many collabs as we can get.
hit me back.