[new] M.pyre ft dragan "unbeatable"

[M-Pyre]

like the title said, it's me (M.pyre a.k.a MC Pyro) ft dragan (that hasn't resided on this forum) together on a song called "unbeatable". It was me who produced the track, meaning I produced the beat (mixing and mastering), recorded the vocals and mixed down the vocals.

the song is two verses (16 each) and two choruses long... excluding the intro. he does the first verse and I the second. at the moment I'm not able to get a hold of his lyrics and I'm not messing them up by trying to type it in myself feedback is very much appreciated and I will return feed

link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/524524298f05c1de/

chorus:
we're unbeatable, can't go down.
we're unbeatable, hear the sound.

here are my lyrics:

When I kill somebody, there's no explanation needed/
Just exaggerated bleeding in a maskerated scene/
I'm at the table. Eating all the strangulated people/
I just strangulated evilly equally feasting/
On each creator that keeps on leaping on me/
My palm needs a bomb to just toss on the street/
I'm the boss on the streets, I'm the cause that the weak/
Just lost all their sleep, I'm a dog if it's needed/
In the dark I come fiending, like shark when it's feeding/
I go bark when I'm heated, and alarm all the freaks/
Scar two dudes kneeling, like a carve on the ceiling
The condition of my imprisoned victims is lingering/
No fingerprints is innocent, the witnesses is listening/
So witness the sickness that’s spilling with the illness/
The thrill gets you careless, but fearless never!/
But the devil never lets me ever level to the level he at/

[Slovinec]

nice i like the instrumental and the begining the most, both did nice 4.5/5

[Requiem]

the beat's not bad, love the intro melody. good hook too, beat wise and lyrical wise. ur flow is incredbile. lyrics are great, verse 1 is better than verse 2. but i have to say freakin AWESOME track. 9.5/10

i have to ask, how long u been makin beats? and what do u use?

[M-Pyre]

thnks to the both of you

I used FL to make this shit happen and I've been making beats a little over a year now

[M-Pyre]

can't I bumb this?

[Solace]

Intro melody was great, and i like the beat man! Sick lyrics man, wasnt feeling the hook btu it wasnt bad. You got a nice flow and i like your voice. Loving those multies man. 9/10 keep this shit up, love to hear more tracks by you in the future

[M-Pyre]

thnks man ^ really appreciate it

and expect allot more where that came from

[Xray]

The quality is pretty cool. As for the beat don't like it to much, the chorus has a country feel to it. Your flow is good, pronunciation is pretty good to. Lyrics are good, but the beat just doesn't do it for me. But I like the string sound you used.

[M-Pyre]

thnks man
about the beat..... to each his own I guess

can I get more feedback