MoBrat -- New No Change

[MoBrat]

alright long story short my main focus on this track was 2 improve my flow but give me ur shit dont hold back let me know where i went wrong so i cant improve...no hard feelings will be held against u for sayin shit but dont just come in sayin i suck without any decent feed plz

Sendspace
http://www.sendspace.com/file/ecmm8i

Zshare
http://www.zshare.net/audio/524782928543636d/

Soundclick
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=7131425&q=hi
ps my soundclick has old shit on it from around the time i started only this track n the darkness are more recent

[randomghost]

nice to see ya bak man..RTI yep yep...the beat is ok...ur vocal need to be boosted a bit....lyrics and flow are good....the hook is amazing.. ...verse 2 is ma fav..... keep it up bro

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

more emotion could help...flow was solid...sumtimes i expanded some words to hit the snare..which made the flow stubble
who's on the hook...seems kool tho...
lyrics are nice again....
hook is the highlight

[MoBrat]

thanks 4 the feed...as 4 emotion i would love 2 show more but its kinda hard workin afternoons i get home n its late like 11pm so its hard 2 be loud/have emotion but thanks i will work on it

[Jay-19]

You got decent flow man. Some pretty dope rhymes.
The hook fits perfect! Really good hook!
I love the beat, that's some scary movie type of beat, really sick!

Would love to see more emotion in your rapping, some angrier voice or something.

But other than that. Really sick track man!

[MoBrat]

You got decent flow man. Some pretty dope rhymes.
The hook fits perfect! Really good hook!
I love the beat, that's some scary movie type of beat, really sick!

Would love to see more emotion in your rapping, some angrier voice or something.

But other than that. Really sick track man!

thanks for the feed i will try and record when no ones sleeping next time 2 try and get more emotion into it

[Jay-19]

You got decent flow man. Some pretty dope rhymes.
The hook fits perfect! Really good hook!
I love the beat, that's some scary movie type of beat, really sick!

Would love to see more emotion in your rapping, some angrier voice or something.

But other than that. Really sick track man!

thanks for the feed i will try and record when no ones sleeping next time 2 try and get more emotion into it

Lol, yeah!
That's probably a good idea!

[KDEWolf]

ur mix is kinda weak and the mic could be better. As far as the raps go u gotta a decent flow like people where saying. Your Deliver needs work tho i felt like your breaths where alittle to long so u had alittle to much space between bars. Also like stated before you might wanna put more emotion in it. 7/10 its got potential and the hook was coo i can dig that.

[MoBrat]

kool thanks 4 the feed man

[DelinQuent]

LMFAO i used this beat for my mixtape

emotion is very lacking. flow was decent, rhyming was nice too.

who was that on the hook? i like her voice and it was a decent hook as well.

2nd verse was very far below the first one. first verse was a lot better.

keep working. delivery needs to be imporved, and i think it'll all sound a LOT better