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Fuck Yourself

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 20th, '08, 08:53

i been on some rnb shit lately lmfao. i cant sing but autotune does that for me lol.

song is basically describing my mentality with the opposite sex right now. not a love song, so i dont wanna hear shit about it being one lol

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Autotune Version- http://www.zshare.net/audio/530429451bd42207/

Natural Version- http://www.zshare.net/audio/5304298254d7b204/

Distortion Version- http://www.zshare.net/audio/53042987b97d0819/

LYRICS
(Chorus)-i dont love you, till you love me/
i dont need you unless you need me/
if you wanna play games, go on and fuck yourself/
fuck yourself... yeah fuck yourself/

Verse 1-i will fuck you, but fuck you/
i dont love you, noooo/
if you show no signs of care, then i'll show no signs of care/
and no i dont care if you think it's not fair/
hearts been thru a lot, and it's showing signs of wear/
only get one shot, it's on you how it fairs/
you may be all i got, but it's still up in the air/
said ya may be all i got, but it's still up in the air/

(Chorus)

Verse 2-if you be a bitch, i'll be a dick/
keep the fire lit, if you give a shit/
i aint bendin over backward, you crazy run that back once/
you could be the pants, but you blew ya second chance/
so fuck yaself, and you know what else?/
yeah fuck yaself, bitch see if i care/
you may be all i got but it's still up in the air/
said you may be all i got but it's still up in the air/

(Chorus)

Verse 3-see you got an attitude, so we took a break/
then you say you changed, but the fuckin change was fake/
so i had to pump the brakes, cause i had too much to take/
and im laughin cause it's great, and i said it's okay/
but there is no way, you can fuck yaself/
mmm fuck yaself, yes i went there/
you may be all i got but it's still up in the air/
said you may be all i got but it's still up in the air/

(Chorus x3)
Last edited by DelinQuent on Dec 21st, '08, 02:09, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby Tash8 » Dec 20th, '08, 09:09

one of the worst autotune song i've ever heard it... ur autotuning was going out of pitch every few seconds...

nothing special about this... lyrics were awful, flow was real simple and choppy, delivery was bad, and how many times can you say fuck you or fuck yourself in a song...

this was disappointing, you've had a LOT better songs.
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 20th, '08, 09:11

thanks for the honesty tash :y:

the point of the song being called Fuck Yourself was to be blunt and to the point. so i felt repeating it would REALLY send that message to a few people lmfao. thanks for taking the time to listen :y:
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby Tash8 » Dec 20th, '08, 09:12

DelinQuent wrote:thanks for the honesty tash :y:

the point of the song being called Fuck Yourself was to be blunt and to the point. so i felt repeating it would REALLY send that message to a few people lmfao. thanks for taking the time to listen :y:


oh haha, well let's see if they didn't get the message from that, then we have some fucked up people in this world.
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 20th, '08, 09:16

woah...way to much autotune

ok i kinda liked the hook...it made me laugh actually...

but yo dude...the lyrics were very bad ...

this is your worst song...

please come out with better shit i know you got it in you
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby Emadyville » Dec 20th, '08, 09:45

I personally liked how straight forward the song was, and DQ you know why this song fits my mood, so I def enjoyed this, I needed a song like this right now.
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby randomghost » Dec 20th, '08, 14:11

mmm..rnb...i dont know if i feed rnb stuff..hehe....the autone wasnt that good here...and the way u sing doesnt fit wid the beat....hehe....but nice try.,...u can keep workin on it..and u will get better :y:
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 20th, '08, 14:55

yeah autotune was used badly lol...dont judgin now..but this could have put some more effort in this....doesnt fill like a real track...or even a track
sry...but not feelin it...
maybe u was bein sarcastic all the way thru...but naww...not my type :sweating:
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 20th, '08, 16:41

well sorry you guys didnt like it :'( lol

thanks to everyone for taking some time out to listen and let me know what you thought. i appreciate it :y:
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 20th, '08, 20:27

I needs zshare :wave:
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 21st, '08, 01:42

i upped 3 versions, the first version is the autotune one, second is with no autotune, and the third one is with distortion as an experiment.

Autotune Version- http://www.zshare.net/audio/530429451bd42207/

Natural Version- http://www.zshare.net/audio/5304298254d7b204/

Distortion Version- http://www.zshare.net/audio/53042987b97d0819/

thanks again to everyone who bothered to listen, even if you hated it, i appreciate it.

although the song sounds a bit sarcastic it's actually pretty personal for me.
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 21st, '08, 18:54

I first listened to the autotune version and I didn't liked it (surprised me lol), I listened to the natural version hahah, u sound like if autotune was already in your voice funny stuff, singin definitively didn't worked on this track.

in general, I like the idea of switchin to rnb for a track, but haha, too vulgar for an rnb track lol.

either way, I could listen to this again cuz I like the feel of it, but still, need to be fixed
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Re: Fuck Yourself

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 21st, '08, 19:26

thanks ax. i appreciate everyone's honesty.

no more RnB for me lmfao.

i have a lot of new material in the works that wont disappoint anyone, i promise :y:
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