The Darkened Equinox

[MC Anonymous]

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=1d65 ... b9a8902bda
Me and my Dad spent A LOT of time mixing this bitch down, so I hope it doesn't disappoint.
Enjoy!

Lyrics:
the megalomaniacal reliable illusions of viable power
is injected to these rappers who think their styles like pliable hours
when I freestyle you cower, ingenious when I write this thesis
my style will be bit to pieces, and I'll attack them like I fight diseases
cause' they are leeches, biting with glass jaws in glass halls
shatter their last calls with punchline 'boxing' like bath stalls
spit inferno till they covered in wrath's walls, and that's all
killing them, now it's hats off for a person who's that small
fuck all of that, I'll bury them in two hundred gallons of ether
massacring feeble people for pleasure like Stalin when he hurt
you don't see dirt, just ill flows that still glow and will go
to the point of no return, and come back when the kills grow
then we'll know who's the supreme verbalist in this business
my consensus is solidified within the eyes of these lyricists
typical materialists rhyming for the money and fame
they are just the dummies in pain transformed into the dummies with no name

If I walk away now then forever I burn
If I cower right now then I may never return
my fate is numbered with the tally's of time
expressed from rhyme to the allies of mind x2

being insane in the brain drives the locomotion for the lyrical train
optical gain refrains my mind from the critical aim
rhyming over mystical games, causes the release of my demons like Ouija
destruction is freaky, corruption will see me, eruption of six 3's
causes 666 to be free as it infects my innocent mind
blazing behind is a trail of fire that continues my demon sent grind
bending some spines like folding books, my holdings took
people's souls until those hearts they showed me shook
flowed these hooks because I can't write damn choruses
bam, my flow stay bright like these damn solstices
whose soul is this, I'm about to suck the life outta it
when I spout and spit you better never doubt my shit
that's doubt isn't it? you don't believe my imperial
I spit rhymes that blind even Zeus eye material.

If I walk away now then forever I burn
If I cower right now then I may never return
my fate is numbered with the tally's of time
expressed from rhyme to the allies of mind x2

I'm droppin' the sickest cannibalistic characteristics
to carelessly sic ticks and dissect with spherical thick clips
this sickness developed through viral databases
spiral data chases in my DNA to shape my Children faces
in the building spaces articulating my next course of attack
force the retraction of a gat and react with 10 clips to the back
I roll wit a ship full of plaques, sip on this if you spit to diss
punchlines hit and miss daily even when I shit and piss
what type of spit is this I whisper to this pussy without whiskers
make this Scott stiffer then Steiners steroid booster lifters
fuckin' rooster kisser, I'll chop off your lips with four chips
cause' only thing gayer then him is Chris Crocker worship
I committed abortion, sliced the placenta with an erect penis
you've come to witness, listen, learn and expect genius
detect the forum seamstress, kill the only bitch in threads
and as easy as I itch my head I can easily kill this snitch instead.


If I walk away now then forever I burn
If I cower right now then I may never return
my fate is numbered with the tally's of time
expressed from rhyme to the allies of mind x4

[mcZu]

The link doesn't work for me, it's like a loophole..keeps returning to the first page over and over

[MC Anonymous]

Fixed link, try that

[mcZu]

^It works, I'll leave feed after listning

[MC Anonymous]

^It works, I'll leave feed after listning

kk bro

[Requiem]

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=1d65 ... b9a8902bda

this link works, u need to edit first post MC

WOW, i really like this track. verse 1 voice/quality's great. but the flow's choppy, tho the lyrics save it. cuz they're sick

the hook is incredible, good job.
verse 2 is awesome, great job on it. no flow fall offs, and sick lyrics.
verse 3 had some flow ups and down, seemed like u tried to squeeze a bunch of words in a line, but i liked it.

overall 8/10, replayable, and the beat's sick.
lmao, random line i heard "like an erect penis"

[MC Anonymous]

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=1d65d87914f2e1cbd2db6fb9a8902bda

this link works, u need to edit first post MC

WOW, i really like this track. verse 1 voice/quality's great. but the flow's choppy, tho the lyrics save it. cuz they're sick

the hook is incredible, good job.
verse 2 is awesome, great job on it. no flow fall offs, and sick lyrics.
verse 3 had some flow ups and down, seemed like u tried to squeeze a bunch of words in a line, but i liked it.

overall 8/10, replayable, and the beat's sick.
lmao, random line i heard "like an erect penis"

LOL thanks bro

[mcZu]

The lyrics are sick as usual, your voice is ok. It's just your flow and delivery which you need to work on.
It seems like you are out of breath each time, and it's like when you spit I can hear the spit in your mouth lol. Hook was nice, mixing was nice and the beat was enjoyable.
You only need to work on your flow and delivery bro, it seems you sort of control your voice but you could practice that too.
Just keep rapping bro, everyone needs to practice. Just try to work on your flow and delivery, and if your at it try to control your voice when your rap. Make it sound straight, as if the beat and your voice are coming from the same source.

Still for your second track ( it is the second one right? ) it's not bad at all.
Overall I enjoyed listning to it, just keep it up bro.

[MC Anonymous]

The lyrics are sick as usual, your voice is ok. It's just your flow and delivery which you need to work on.
It seems like you are out of breath each time, and it's like when you spit I can hear the spit in your mouth lol. Hook was nice, mixing was nice and the beat was enjoyable.
You only need to work on your flow and delivery bro, it seems you sort of control your voice but you could practice that too.
Just keep rapping bro, everyone needs to practice. Just try to work on your flow and delivery, and if your at it try to control your voice when your rap. Make it sound straight, as if the beat and your voice are coming from the same source.

Still for your second track ( it is the second one right? ) it's not bad at all.
Overall I enjoyed listning to it, just keep it up bro.

Thanks for the great feed bro! =)

[Solace]

Shit man your really not wasting time with the mic are you? 2 tracks in 2 days, i got so much respect for that Lyrics are fucking ill, and i think its cool your father is helping you with this I'm liking the lyrics to the hook, but the mixing wasn't that good. I think the beat is nice, where'd you get it? Your delivery is good for starting, actually its really good for starting! The only thing i really wasnt feeling was your flow. It wasn't that good really, which threw me off on this track. Your earning your spot in the Audio Stage, keep it up, 7.5/10

[MC Anonymous]

Shit man your really not wasting time with the mic are you? 2 tracks in 2 days, i got so much respect for that Lyrics are fucking ill, and i think its cool your father is helping you with this I'm liking the lyrics to the hook, but the mixing wasn't that good. I think the beat is nice, where'd you get it? Your delivery is good for starting, actually its really good for starting! The only thing i really wasnt feeling was your flow. It wasn't that good really, which threw me off on this track. Your earning your spot in the Audio Stage, keep it up, 7.5/10

Thanks bro! I make a vow to keep improving with every track I post.
Again thanks for the in-depth feed!

[Jay-19]

You got no problems with lyrics whatsoever.
But you need to fix up your flow man.

It's choppy at times and it seems like you got way too long lines to make it flow.
Just shorten them down a little bit and I think you've gotten a long way with trying to fix the flow up.
The flow in the chorus is nice, really pulled that off man, great job.
Mixing isn't too bad, but could be better, no doubt. But that will come eventually.
Delivery is okay, at least for this track, considering the lyrics fits it.
But since I haven't heard any other tracks from you, I can't tell if it's good or bad.
But it's cool in this track.

Overall, not bad at all for a beginner in audio. You absolutely have the potential to be really good.
You got an astronomic vocabulary!
Just try to manage your flow and delivery.

[MC Anonymous]

You got no problems with lyrics whatsoever.
But you need to fix up your flow man.

It's choppy at times and it seems like you got way too long lines to make it flow.
Just shorten them down a little bit and I think you've gotten a long way with trying to fix the flow up.
The flow in the chorus is nice, really pulled that off man, great job.
Mixing isn't too bad, but could be better, no doubt. But that will come eventually.
Delivery is okay, at least for this track, considering the lyrics fits it.
But since I haven't heard any other tracks from you, I can't tell if it's good or bad.
But it's cool in this track.

Overall, not bad at all for a beginner in audio. You absolutely have the potential to be really good.
You got an astronomic vocabulary!
Just try to manage your flow and delivery.

Thank you bro, next track that's gonna be posted, flow is gonna be 100% spot on. You wait and see

[Solace]

Seriously your gunna be one of the top rappers on this site in 3 months. Your already one of the top writers, and this is only your 2nd track and its great.

[Requiem]

make me feel like shit i've had 7 tracks on Tr and not one of them was recieved like "oh god this was the shit!"

except for not what it use to be. it was recieved as "ur best yet, good job" but that took me over a year to achieve LMAO good job man, keep at it