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Third Time's a Charm

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Third Time's a Charm

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 28th, '08, 20:00

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=1d65 ... b9a8902bda
Mixed by me, tell me what ya think. I worked very hard on the delivery/flow aspect, so tell me if my efforts were good or in vain. Thanks :y:

Lyrics:
Grasp the evil vibes of those angry souls and conceal it
reveal it, let it loose and let the guns feel it
then wield it, let it out of control, just let it go
forget the flow, jump on to the track and just let it blow
as it explodes with the force of jealousy cause' they not me
you can't STOP ME, I'll DROP THESE till' I'm TOP 3
don't COPY my lyrical style, or my way to deliver
consider the source, my flow unique like rivers
I'm here to save this rap game from it's damn depression
these lessons comes from my very own profession
and until I die I'll keep pumping lyrics from my own heart
yall have thrown darts, and from that I have grown smart
then what I've shown starts, bullets spray from a AK
the day plays songs of sorrow from my stray ways
gray days come to those who are misunderstood
and under hoods or undergrounds is where the thunder stood
these blunders would cause havoc, but not me
I got these, the rocks freeze like Kraft block cheese
those who are cocky I got these damn techs to blow
check the flow, gliding up and down with respect to show
protect from blows, or I'll destroy you without effort
I spout clever punchlines that will get ya brow severed
however, letters and words don't express emotion
with these motions I spit deeper then three oceans
rhymes flow natural like tree potions, so I see those sins
get angry like orphans and release my mind's endorphins
the door splits, my mind forfeits for four clips
before this came the weed smoke and those whore's clits
the flow's shore rips,and the anger rises with a palm revolver
fill her up with lead until the bullets dissolve her
resolve her? impossible when in these fury enticed rages
and that is shown in the flow when I recite pages.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Third Time's a Charm

Postby James R. » Dec 28th, '08, 20:14

Gave you feed on MSN :smoking: I'm likin it man. Keep droppin a track every day and you'll have a fuckin album on here in 2 weeks lol
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Re: Third Time's a Charm

Postby Solace » Dec 29th, '08, 02:04

You already know that i think this is one of my favourite pieces by you man. Everythings good about it. About the audio, well definitely your flow is better, but its fucked at some points. I didn't really like this audio track as much as that other one you posted, The Darkened Equinox or something. Your voice wasnt really fitting with the beat in my opinion. 7/10...Your taking this music really seriously, its not hard to notice. Your dropping tracks, mixing em by yourself everyday.
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Re: Third Time's a Charm

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 29th, '08, 02:12

Damn bro!
Huge improvement on the flow and delivery. It's almost like another artist man!
Lyrics are good as always, and the mixing is a zillion times better than on your other tracks!

Just keep dropping at this speed and you'll improve like a motherfucker!
Which you've already done, but you'll get even better!

Tight shit man! :y:
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Re: Third Time's a Charm

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 29th, '08, 02:16

Thanks dudes! Keep a look out cause' I'm posting another track today, be prepared! :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Third Time's a Charm

Postby Solace » Dec 29th, '08, 02:19

MC Anonymous wrote:Thanks dudes! Keep a look out cause' I'm posting another track today, be prepared! :y:

Dopeeee :)
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