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No Respect

Postby Skorp » Dec 30th, '08, 20:27

This is a track im entering into a competetion for Anno Domini. Had fun doing this shit..lemme get some feedback..appreciate it.
Skorp - No Respect.mp3 - 4.07MB
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Re: No Respect

Postby Solace » Dec 30th, '08, 21:06

Beat annoyed the fuck out of me. Below average lyrics. And i definitely hear the Eminem in that. Chorus was really weak. Keep at it tho man :y:
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Re: No Respect

Postby Skorp » Dec 30th, '08, 21:12

lol, i see there aint much love going on round here :D

and yea, i'm actually trynna check out tracks but IE is being a bitch.
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Re: No Respect

Postby Skorp » Dec 30th, '08, 21:14

McMaybe wrote:I listened to your myspace, I must say... you pretty much bite Eminems whole style. And your music is quite commercial considering how you diss the commercial style.

you obviously have no idea what commercial music is my du. True, i do have songs about money, but its about me having money..rather, me trynna get it. Call me a biter; i could careless; this is why i said Em Influenced me, for the fact that i like to put my life into my music like he does..negga :whistle:
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Re: No Respect

Postby Solace » Dec 30th, '08, 21:19

Skorp wrote:negga :whistle:

Get the fuck outta here n/igga :laughing:
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Re: No Respect

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 30th, '08, 21:22

Pretty poor.... All I can say... :n:
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Re: No Respect

Postby Skorp » Dec 30th, '08, 21:38

True, what you say about the commercial..but as i also said, i have a twist when it comes to the actual content of the song. I work on my flow everyday..and i cant help my style, its what i been doing for 6 years so thats kinda tough to not rap they way i rap :smoking:
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Re: No Respect

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 31st, '08, 00:45

I like your voice...but your a total biter dude...fuck man ...

bad beat

good delivery

good flow...

generic topic from a generic artist

HORIBLE lyrics...rhyming gay with lane wtf? dude heres some advice...avoid eminem at all costs...start listening to other artist alot and try to keep eminem out of your ears or you will just bite him more and more....

when your white, you have to come strong on the lyrics part (i.e. just look what happened with vanella ice)

you have potential but just stop biting
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Re: No Respect

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 31st, '08, 01:10

i didnt like the track, it was good quality tho, i didnt like the lyrics, but you rapped it well, the content wasn't great tho so in my eyes it was a failure and that's why you get no respect
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: No Respect

Postby Solace » Dec 31st, '08, 01:21

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:I like your voice...but your a total biter dude...fuck man ...

bad beat

good delivery

good flow...

generic topic from a generic artist

HORIBLE lyrics...rhyming gay with lane wtf? dude heres some advice...avoid eminem at all costs...start listening to other artist alot and try to keep eminem out of your ears or you will just bite him more and more....

when your white, you have to come strong on the lyrics part (i.e. just look what happened with vanella ice)

you have potential but just stop biting

Yeah man definitely, try what he said^
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Re: No Respect

Postby Skorp » Dec 31st, '08, 02:11

There's only one problem: i am not white :o im latino. I hear a buncha other cats over here with the same structure but its funny that im the only 'biter' lol..yall some funny niggas
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Re: No Respect

Postby Solace » Dec 31st, '08, 02:39

Skorp wrote:There's only one problem: i am not white :o im latino. I hear a buncha other cats over here with the same structure but its funny that im the only 'biter' lol..yall some funny *****

if you cant take critique then get outta here.
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Re: No Respect

Postby Kez » Dec 31st, '08, 03:04

I had to download this and listen to it to see if he really is biting Eminem like you lot said.

First off, you ought to be greatful that people are checking this. Most people who come here for feed without giving any feed out beforehand get no attention. I also relate to you, because i tried to sound like Eminem when i first started out. I evolved and got my own style. Maybe this is what will happen with you.

Now, as far as the track. I actually liked it, quite a bit; the only problem was, i liked it because your flow, delivery, pretty much everything, sounds like Eminem. Your flow was good, the concept i like and the lyrical content is actually up my alley. But your delivery and voice sounds too much like Eminem, and although that made me enjoy it a lot, it's only because you sound like Eminem. And that's not right.

But i see possibility in you.

Now go give some other people feed, cause i aint checkin another song from you until i see that you do.

Oh, and don't have a go at people when they give their opinion. End of the day, you asked for it, and they gave it. If you disagree, take it into consideration, thank them and move on.
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Re: No Respect

Postby Xray » Dec 31st, '08, 03:27

Skorp wrote:There's only one problem: i am not white :o im latino. I hear a buncha other cats over here with the same structure but its funny that im the only 'biter' lol..yall some funny *****


I don't give a fuck if your pink don't be bringing that word in here, no one uses that word on this forum, I personally hate that word cause it brings so much drama so avoid it.
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Re: No Respect

Postby Solace » Dec 31st, '08, 05:34

i shouldnt have used it then :zipped:
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