*New* Big Mak & Apocalypse: "Verbal Destruction"

[Makaveli525]

Beat is from 'Hello'... but obviously we're not competin with Dre, Cube and Ren... lol

Apocalypse, Mak, Apocalypse... that's the verse order.

Anyone care to listen?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5357292784c1c995/

[mcZu]

Not bad, the lyrics were overall good. The first dude flow's ok, just his delivery sounds boring...
And it's like I could hear his voice trembeling while he was rapping. Second verse ( You ) was quite good.
You flow great and your delivery is much better then the other one. Last verse was better then the first one, his voice sounded better. And his delivery did improve a bit.
Overall this track is not bad, just the Apocalypse dude needs to improve his delivery and try to control his voice.
But I enjoyed this track nontheless

[Ka0t1c]

Mak, your verse was the best, the first was the worst, and the third wasn't too bad but too basic and generic imo, still a decent track, your skills are on a high level