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MC Anonymous Blood and Bones

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 28th, '09, 23:32

http://www.mediafire.com/?jklmyyeytji
Produced/mixed by Tomega
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Lyrical torture, faster then porche's, inertia
will hurt ya, desert ya, throw you in a dumpster
hustler, selling water to the ocean, emotion
commotion explodin', lyrics cause erosion
explosions, cliffhangers keep you stagnant
that's it, destroy CPU beats like a magnet
word tactics, numbers on my side like stratego
turn to a hero, grab all number 1's like I'm Neo
typical, walk the blocks like I'm mario
I'm sorry though, shrooms aint in my audio
vocals blast stereo's, titanic when I panic
wreak pain, my eyes drown in ocean havoc
take my average, minus the pain, get nothing
let someone tell you one thing that's something
one thing I realized, my eyes only show me lies
he cries at night, lost in his weeded sunrise
a popped fuse, detonate on sight to fight
my rights are sliced, diced, iced, and swiped right
from me, dressing bummy, a really sad soul
smokin' bad bowls, knees kneeling on coal
spore bearing lifeforms form a swarm that's torn
I was born, horns that was sworn to do the scorns
honed by pain, prone to shame, I was enslaved
living in a cave, beaten, unable to shave
paved my way, hammer gripped, smash it
bash shit, crash land while I'm in my cockpit
stop it, top this with octaves of hot spit
my clots switch, drop hits just for top fits
Ha ha ha, I switch flows and ditch hoes
grip those, blast it faster then ink from biro's
pop you faster then my microphone's static
my fire under ya ass keeps you nomadic
a lyrical addict, sporadic with delivery
yo candy-cain, ya girl?, ye she's slippery
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: MC Anonymous Blood and Bones

Postby mcZu » Jan 28th, '09, 23:44

You deff improved your flow, delivery is still lackin bro. And you should work on that ''spit in your mind'', 'cuase I can actually hear that lol. Lyrics are sick as ussual, you should work on your delivery and energy.
But it's defnitly a good song bro, keep it up :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous Blood and Bones

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 28th, '09, 23:49

mcZu wrote:You deff improved your flow, delivery is still lackin bro. And you should work on that ''spit in your mind'', 'cuase I can actually hear that lol. Lyrics are sick as ussual, you should work on your delivery and energy.
But it's defnitly a good song bro, keep it up :y:

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Re: MC Anonymous Blood and Bones

Postby Solace » Jan 29th, '09, 02:15

Delivery really needs improvement, beat was okay. Nothing really relistenable. Lyrics sick as usual and your flow is getting a lot better man. Keep at it dude :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous Blood and Bones

Postby gutawafang » Jan 29th, '09, 02:36

I've just listened to it. It is great. Especially the line, "spore bearing lifeforms form a swarm that's torn
I was born, horns that was sworn to do the scorns".

GREAT.
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Re: MC Anonymous Blood and Bones

Postby AspirinE » Jan 29th, '09, 19:50

I like the rhymes... decent quality.

7/10 - overal... (lyrics/beats/hook/idea)

+ good lyrics... nothing of point
good concistency
- flow needs work, not in the sence that u dont drop lines to the snare. but u need to innovate and play with the way u flow.


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Re: MC Anonymous Blood and Bones

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 29th, '09, 20:55

AspirinE wrote:I like the rhymes... decent quality.

7/10 - overal... (lyrics/beats/hook/idea)

+ good lyrics... nothing of point
good concistency
- flow needs work, not in the sence that u dont drop lines to the snare. but u need to innovate and play with the way u flow.


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