Fly- New Emadyville

[Emadyville]

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

This song is much different then anything I've done prior, it features Key Notes, a guy who is real popular in my area (800,000 plus plays. He sent me this and I wrote it in a half hour, sent it to him, he said he liked it and I recorded it about a week after. i only have one verse but I'm curious to see what you all think of it cause like I said I never did this type of song.

Lyrics:

We have you pointing to the sky like damn how we fly,
Don't ask about our method man you know how high,
Rhymes will never downsize when I hit the ground rise,
The thrones surrounded by guys but I see where the crown lies,
AndI'm headin for my peak with a mountain to climb,
I'm countin rhymes when I fly and in no amount of time,
We're both about to shine watch us light the sky up,
So high up to stay on earth we need to be tied up,
If you want to take Notes he's the Key to the ignition,
I'm the Dubs on the ride and our musical position,
In each song is so gone, and so outta reach,
I will rhyme all day and he will sing withouta beat,
And my lyrics will confuse you like a rubics cube,
I'm on another level, you wish you could do it too,
But it's not about me, or about who is who,
We fly away from the pack with what our music do...

[<Stiiccy>]

wow dude you fuckin murdered key notes lol...seriously i loved ur verse...

though the delivery is lacking..i think you should dub the entire verse so your words don't get lost...

really dug the lyrics and flow man...really good job

[Solace]

Edited this post so you dont see the whole bots message, makes the topic cleaner. Anyways I didnt listen to it because I'm a lazy mofo, but Ive read the lyrics and like like them. Keep it up man.

[Slim Zaddy]

"There's no need," Harry muttered, but Uncle Vernon made any further explanation unnecessary by saying loudly,
"Well, this is good-bye then boy."
He swung his right arm upward to shake Harry's hand, but at the last moment seemed unable to face it, and merely closed his fist and began swinging it backward and forward like a metronome.
"Ready, Duddy?" asked Petunia, fussily checking the clasp of her handbag so as to avoid looking at Harry altogether.
Harry led them all back into the kitchen where wow gold, laughing and chattering, they settled on chairs, buy cheap wow dold, sat themselves upon Aunt Petunia's gleaming work surfaces, or leaned up against her spotless appliances; Ron, long and lanky; Hermione wow gold, her bushy hair tied back in a long plait lord of the rings gold; Fred and George, grinning identically; Bill, badly scarred and long-haired; Mr. Weasley, kind-faced, balding, his spectacles a little awry; Mad-Eye, battle-worn, one-legged, his bright blue magical eye whizzing in its socket; Tonks, whose short hair was her favorite shade of bright pink; Lupin, grayer, more lined; Fleur, slender and beautiful, with her long silvery blonde hair; Kingsley, bald and broad-shouldered; Hagrid, with his wild hair and beard WOW Power leveling, standing hunchbacked to avoid hitting his head on the ceiling; and Mundungus Fletcher, small, dirty, and hangdog, with his droopy beady hound's eyes and matted hair. Harry's heart seemed to expand and glow at the sight: He
felt incredibly fond of all of them, even Mundungus wow gold, whom he had tried to strangle the last time they had met. Harry looking for wow gold at the world...
Dudley did not answer but stood there with his mouth slightly ajar, reminding Harry a little of the giant, Grawp.
"Come along, then," said Uncle Vernon.
He had already reached the living room door when Dudley mumbled, "I don't understand."
"What don't you understand, popkin?" asked Petunia looking up at her son.
Dudley raised a large, hamlike hand to point at Harry.
"Why isn't he coming with us?
Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia froze when they stood staring at Dudley as though he had just expressed a desire to become a ballerina.
"What?" said Uncle Vernon loudly.
"Why isn't he coming too?" asked Dudley.
"Well, he\a151doesn't want to," said Uncle Vernon, turning to glare at Harry and adding, "You don't want to, do you?"
"Not in the slightest," said Harry.
"There you are," Uncle Vernon told Dudley. "Now come on we're off."
He marched out of the room. They heard the front door open, but Dudley did not move and after a few faltering steps Aunt Petunia stopped too.
"What now?" barked Uncle Vernon, reappearing in the doorway.
It seemed that Dudley was struggling with concepts too difficult to put into words. After several moments of apparently painful internal struggle he said, "But where's he going to go?"
Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon looked at each other. It was clear that Dudley was frightening them. Hestia Jones broke the silence.
"But\a133 surely you know where your nephew is going?" she asked looking bewildered.
"Certainly we know," said Vernon Dursley. "He's off with some of your lot, isn't he? Right, Dudley, let's get in the car, you heard the man, we're in a hurry.

what the fuck this supposed to mean ??

[Ka0t1c]

lmfao^ ne ways that verse was good but i know there are places where it can be pushed further to show improvements on your talent, one thing is work on ur multies and vocab then your delivery will have a bigger effect. nice job tho

[Emadyville]

thanks for feeding, and sorry i posted this twice that was an accident, idk what that long pointless post on here was though from yuio or whatever lol