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first time

Postby Sarah P » Mar 16th, '09, 15:31

its my first time, so go easy on me lol.
props to Xray for the mixing

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5713016915d3fd65/

how i lost you girl i will never know
but to win you back i will have a go
i'm not gonna give up and end the show
and if i have to i will sell my soul
get back to me girl, just let me know
if you'd like to be with me and share my dreams
and creep with me into this bed i'm in
'cause you know that we were meant to be
you were the gift that god sent to me
you didn't ask for much, no diamond rings
no jewellery, but i was bad at timing things
so i lost you, the only one that made me smile
baby girl, please come back to me
i really can't believe this is actually happening
it's so sad for me, that i can't hold you any more
i told you on the twenty fourth
that our anniversary was only three days away
but that didn't stop you from leaving, you made your way
and now i cry on my own, all alone
praying you will call my phone and walk on home
i'm sitting here, i'm waiting for you
if you come i won't ignore you
being with you is what i chose to be
so come home to me, and live how we're supposed to be
Last edited by Sarah P on Mar 16th, '09, 16:38, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: SLMacDougall's first verse ever

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 16th, '09, 16:22

oh man...your flow was fucked up....not hatin on accents but your pronouncation was extremely hard to understand..at least for me
sajjad did good mixing this....wasnt actually tooooo bad..but since i dont know how the raw acapella sounded...anywayz
your voice sounds very deep..always thought you have this squeezy voice goin on... :whistle:
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Re: SLMacDougall's first verse ever

Postby Sarah P » Mar 16th, '09, 16:24

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:oh man...your flow was fucked up....not hatin on accents but your pronouncation was extremely hard to understand..at least for me
sajjad did good mixing this....wasnt actually tooooo bad..but since i dont know how the raw acapella sounded...anywayz
your voice sounds very deep..always thought you have this squeezy voice goin on... :whistle:


lol makes sense coz it was my first time
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Re: SLMacDougall's first verse ever

Postby The GameKeeper » Mar 16th, '09, 16:38

I thought it was good bro... definitely hard to understand though... I thought the flow started out really good and then it got a little choppy.

Who made that beat??? That shit was dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooope... Sounded like some Dre shit...

7/10 man... I though the lyrics were great.
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Re: SLMacDougall's first verse ever

Postby Sarah P » Mar 16th, '09, 16:40

The GameKeeper wrote:I thought it was good bro... definitely hard to understand though... I thought the flow started out really good and then it got a little choppy.

Who made that beat??? That shit was dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooope... Sounded like some Dre shit...

7/10 man... I though the lyrics were great.


thanks. though i probs ent gonna record ever again lol. its not really for me. and er, think xray made it, you'll have to ask him
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Re: first time

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 16th, '09, 17:04

hey bro , actually i liked it , i can tell yeah as other's here said , you were a little bit hard to understand , the beat is catchy , yeah mixing was great off course cuz Xray made it , i liked your flow till the middle then you start to step back , you have a good delivery too , but i think this type of song should be made on a slow tone , spitting words slower , cuz it's an emotion song and we have to feel it , and i did'tn ,, but yeah good try for the first time :y:
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Re: first time

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 17th, '09, 20:54

great voice for a girl :flower:
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Re: first time

Postby Tornado » Mar 18th, '09, 16:48

Wow..your flow was choppy, going on and off but the accent was hard, even for me, real britishness in that but since you ain't a artist, fuck it,it don't matter
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Re: first time

Postby blend123 » Mar 19th, '09, 09:26

lol i have that beat man, you can find it on shadowville.com. it's not bad just fix your flow a little bit
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