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MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 16th, '09, 22:29

http://www.zshare.net/audio/57146411ab51a2e1/

No lyrics... sorry.
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby Tomega » Mar 16th, '09, 23:09

cool.. those were the lyrics you sent me.. very dope.
beat is great and your flow is improving man.. keep it up :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby slimsoxshady » Mar 16th, '09, 23:20

dude ur a freakin rappin dictionary lol...i don't know how u fit all that crap in those bars but it definitely gives it replay value...about the mixing, i would try so that the lyrics don't stand out that much;
if ur gonna play this on a good system, u need the beat to be a bit stronger...u know what i mean?
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 16th, '09, 23:40

slimsoxshady wrote:dude ur a freakin rappin dictionary lol...i don't know how u fit all that crap in those bars but it definitely gives it replay value...about the mixing, i would try so that the lyrics don't stand out that much;
if ur gonna play this on a good system, u need the beat to be a bit stronger...u know what i mean?

True man thanks for the feed, same for you tomega :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby _Ironic_ » Mar 17th, '09, 09:49

first guy rappin was alright, the quality could be better, flow fell apart at times
second guy, awesome. Professional sound and above average lyrics

second guy saved this track, sorry. I say it how I see it

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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 17th, '09, 13:18

_Ironic_ wrote:first guy rappin was alright, the quality could be better, flow fell apart at times
second guy, awesome. Professional sound and above average lyrics

second guy saved this track, sorry. I say it how I see it

6.5/10

Thanks for the feed, I agree he was better then me... I put to many syllables in my verse again....
Next track I'll step my game up. :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 17th, '09, 13:26

lmao@intro..sounded like the dude doesnt know his own name xD cuz he like choked at that moment
your verse is sick man..lyrics are pure fire :y: flow is still a lil bit too fast..like you could smoothen it out...make it more calm...your delivery was solid...again smoothen out a bit...plus your screaming almost blows up the mic you recordin with
umm 5th Bank did nice...his flow was decent...really smooth...lyrics were aite..
your 3rd verse...damn...rhymes are nice...again...you get lost quick...maybe cuz you put word after word and get confused quick....as i said..try to smoothen it out...
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 17th, '09, 13:31

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:lmao@intro..sounded like the dude doesnt know his own name xD cuz he like choked at that moment
your verse is sick man..lyrics are pure fire :y: flow is still a lil bit too fast..like you could smoothen it out...make it more calm...your delivery was solid...again smoothen out a bit...plus your screaming almost blows up the mic you recordin with
umm 5th Bank did nice...his flow was decent...really smooth...lyrics were aite..
your 3rd verse...damn...rhymes are nice...again...you get lost quick...maybe cuz you put word after word and get confused quick....as i said..try to smoothen it out...

Thanks for the feed bro! Next drop I do I will have less syllables. See how that affects my flow. :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 17th, '09, 20:56

why no lyrics :confusion: ? lol

still got a bit flow issues, and you got too many words on a bar so that won't let you deliver it at its best, the lyrics are good punchline-wise...

the second guy is SICK :worship: :worship: :worship:

very good track anyways... you should try to do a topical song :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby randomghost » Mar 17th, '09, 21:29

ama feed when i get home :8)
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Re: MC Anonymous Feat. 5TH Bank

Postby mcZu » Mar 17th, '09, 21:33

Already gave you feed on msn, good track. Delivery still needs work, lyrics sick, flow was onpoint and the beat was pretty dope.
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