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Profaz ft C-Riz-Stumikam

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Mar 22nd, '09, 12:41

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Re: Profaz ft C-Riz-Stumikam

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 22nd, '09, 14:07

Can you zshare it? :unsure:
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Re: Profaz ft C-Riz-Stumikam

Postby Xray » Mar 22nd, '09, 14:42

Heres a zshare link.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/57430964f22dffb5/

Oh shit I remember this beat, epic as fuck. C-Riz you did good on this one, flow was on point. Mixing wasn't bad it sounded alright, lyrics are cool to. Delivery needed to be more powerful though, it was kinda laid back a bit, I didn't feel the anger in your verse. Good verse though, pronunciation still needs work though. :sweating:

Profaz you talking in the chorus was weird as hell, it was just unexpected and uncalled for. :unsure: Your verse was good though, flow was there, but the delivery sounded like your high pitching your voice too much. You should try to deepen your voice more, not saying make it sound fake, nah, but make it more balanced cause at the moment its high pitched. Good verse.

Good collab, not better than We Keep Aiming though. Keep it up. :b: :b:
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Re: Profaz ft C-Riz-Stumikam

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:00

Xray wrote:Heres a zshare link.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/57430964f22dffb5/

Oh shit I remember this beat, epic as fuck. C-Riz you did good on this one, flow was on point. Mixing wasn't bad it sounded alright, lyrics are cool to. Delivery needed to be more powerful though, it was kinda laid back a bit, I didn't feel the anger in your verse. Good verse though, pronunciation still needs work though. :sweating:

Profaz you talking in the chorus was weird as hell, it was just unexpected and uncalled for. :unsure: Your verse was good though, flow was there, but the delivery sounded like your high pitching your voice too much. You should try to deepen your voice more, not saying make it sound fake, nah, but make it more balanced cause at the moment its high pitched. Good verse.

Good collab, not better than We Keep Aiming though. Keep it up. :b: :b:

propz for the feed bro :worship:
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Re: Profaz ft C-Riz-Stumikam

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:03

Beat is fucking insane! :worship:

C-Riz.
Flow was good man, but I think it lacks a little delivery.
Good lyrics, some dope shit in there. :y:
Can't think of anything more to say really.

Profaz.
Pretty much what Xray said.


Really short feedback, but that's all I could think of at the moment. :whistle:
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Re: Profaz ft C-Riz-Stumikam

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:06

Jay-19 wrote:Beat is fucking insane! :worship:

C-Riz.
Flow was good man, but I think it lacks a little delivery.
Good lyrics, some dope shit in there. :y:
Can't think of anything more to say really.

Profaz.
Pretty much what Xray said.


Really short feedback, but that's all I could think of at the moment. :whistle:

thanks for chekin man appreciate it :worship:
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Re: Profaz ft C-Riz-Stumikam

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:53

thanks to jay and sajjad :y:
yeah for real i dont know whats happenin with my delievery :( cant go all out like i did :(
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