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Hard Times (feat. Alysha)

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Hard Times (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Mar 31st, '09, 05:28

i think its pretty decent, great for a practice track imo. plz feed honestly :smoking: i produced, mixed, yada yada....

Remastered Version

http://www.zshare.net/audio/58009626f0bbf279/

FIrst version

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5796034379094ba0/

EDIT (my flow coulda been better :sweating: )

also, shoutout to Chet Starr, whom tried hard to be on the track, but kept breakin mics :whistle: me and alysha still want u on another one of our tracks :p
Last edited by Requiem on Apr 1st, '09, 02:43, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Hard Times (feat. Alysha)

Postby randomghost » Mar 31st, '09, 09:06

alysha i like her verse but kinda got problem wid mastering or soem....vocals could've masterd better :happy: nice classic beat :o i like it.reminds me of GTA san andreas :p ur verse is good..nice lyrics....flow is good...but there are parts where u miss flow or u go pretty fast so ya can fit the bar....but i like it...could be better..good job though :y: lookin forward to hear more :happy:
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Re: Hard Times (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 1st, '09, 02:35

^thx man :happy:

EDIT i updated it with the remastered version
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Re: Hard Times (feat. Alysha)

Postby Solace » Apr 1st, '09, 02:42

tbh i really didnt like this track. I couldnt hear ANYTHING you guys said. The chorus was Meh. I didnt like the whole bored delivery, er "laid back" if thats what you say you were going for...I feel youd do better a lot if you spoke what was actually going on in your life, like Ice your not poor so why whine about it pretending you are? The beat was okay. Your improving in that. But you guys both sounded bored as fuck as if not even putting in an effort. Peace.
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Re: Hard Times (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 1st, '09, 02:44

going softer and spitting slowly's a completely different flow, lol. i understand if u take it as "bored" :wave:
thx for feedin tho man, and yea, the chorus coulda been better smh. and check the remastered version for my redone verse :y:
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Re: Hard Times (feat. Alysha)

Postby Xray » Apr 1st, '09, 02:45

The beat is laid back as hell, it needs fast spitting IMO and you both were slow. So it didn't sound good. Alysha was struggling to flow to this beat. Should have used a different beat cause its way too slow for both of you. Also Alysha's vocals seem really messy, your one was too but less messy.

Wasn't feeling this song beside the beat. Definitely need to re-record this.
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Re: Hard Times (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 1st, '09, 04:04

^thx for feed man, lmao i'md one with this track. i like spitting faster anyways :8)
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