Battle My Enemies

[MC Anonymous]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/580572991c34bc9c/

When life...takes control of you
you just got to dig deep within you
and pull the strenght.. to survive.

Lost focus, crying with tears of liquid rage
hit this page, with a fiery heart like a mage
the world revolves, as my life circulates
believe it, all you fuckers do is circle hate
rewind my life, past all the fire and flames
it will take more then this to retire my name
crusified with spikes, my heart's in submission
I never did wrong, why did you start your decisions
to lable me, stomp on my jaw with a stigma boot
how much more can your verbal fuckin' trigger shoot
fury enticed me, I'm surrounded with my thoughts
I want to throw daggers, yet tears my eyes brought
Soft by nature, warm heartedness melts the ice
even though my back is whipped way more then twice
For all those who hear my words, I apologize
for you have to live in a world filled with shallow lies

When life throws down the shadows of death
beat it back, just go on and battle your breath
Make it so you survive, in this day and time
My soul lives on everytime I lay a rhyme x2

My glass heart, speaks softly through the mist
my mind's abyss, tells me to skew my wrists
twist them and break, that way the truth is lost
battling against myself for just a ruthless cost
telling myself, life is but a worthless cause
just a satist looking on with his thirsty paws
a game, a pawn, my mind plays with no avail
a boat with burning bark, and torn up sails
born in hail, it seems as my life is frozen stiff
a guitarist, expressing life through spoken rifts
my pen's the sword, and I'll attack tonight
the time is right, now stand back and fight
through words by pen, fiery passion within
born without skin, without the fashion of sin
hell's fury is crystalized right into a ruby
and I'm here wearing the ring, easy and truely.

When life throws down the shadows of death
beat it back, just go on and battle your breath
Make it so you survive, in this day and time
My soul lives on everytime I lay a rhyme x2

I have problems, so why do you amplify
my need to seclude myself and hide
living life without a cause, a maze with water
drowned silenty, then get hazed and slaughtered
scarred by words, verbiage condensed inside
covered in pain because those scars are multiplied
by the words you put aside, and hurt me with
the pain that can't be erased with bursts of spliffs
shit, I've lived a life of misery, and due to this
the audiance inside my mind just boos and spits
I quit, silently I'll slip into the land of digital
and count down my life, with oxygen intervals
burried without honor, blood drained from rocks
if you didn't want kids, you just gained a flock
my misery lives on, as long as this beat moves
it will stay inside your mind, as the heat grooves

When life throws down the shadows of death
beat it back, just go on and battle your breath
Make it so you survive, in this day and time
My soul lives on everytime I lay a rhyme x2

That's right, keep your head up, always look deep inside of your soul
and pull that inner strenght you have,
Never fall to suicidal thoughts, never fall to depression
because when you fall you will never get up
I made this song for the purpose of release
Learn from it, experience it.. head my words...
Never fall to depression

[Drama Setter]

that was awesome keep it up homie .

[MC Anonymous]

that was awesome keep it up homie .

Thanks dude

[Requiem]

i already fed this on msn, but defnly ur best track ever. hands down some of the best shit i've heard on trshady

[Matik]

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[Solace]

nice nice ..... what up fellas im new to the site and im makin my way around the forums and shit so bare wit me ... where do i go to upload my tracks? ...any help?

zshare.net

but please dont post again cause its best to not have off topic posts Go to the And You Are? section and introduce yourself there.

[_Ironic_]

yo this was nice, I wasn't really feelin the flow, and the emotion seemed sort of off. 2nd verse came in nicely as did the 3rd, the lyrics were nice. you just need to work on your delivery, other than that...this was a solid drop

7/10.

keep workin bro, I know it will come easier the more tracks you make. just try to be more comfortable on the mic.

[threeandtwenty]

lyrics...

[Xray]

It wasn't bad, wasn't feeling the beat. But the main problem is there's way to much water in your mouth, you get that when your nervous, need to be more relaxed at what your doing otherwise your gonna sound like you got a lisp and spit from the tip of your tongue like literally. Your mixing is the same on every song, which makes it feel like the same old shit again. You should switch up every now and than on a few tracks, specially on a track like this, cause the beat is laid back, so I need to hear something fresh otherwise I won't enjoy it. Delivery could be better due to what I said earlier, flow wasn't bad, and wasn't amazing either. Wasn't feeling the song.

[soperman005]

shits real dope.. the lyrics and beat are spot on.

reminds me of some immortal technique or something in a way. like some raw ass hip hop.

[preest]

I like this it was sick, the flow was sometimes a little patchy but all in all it was a good track!

The hook was sick!!!!!!!