Brand New Song "Them Girls"

[soperman005]

You can download it here:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/585093252636c330

Myspace Page:
http://www.myspace.com/mikeybsopadope

[soperman005]

feedback?

[DƎRDYPK]

I like this
who can't?
everybody likes Them Girls
keep up the work

[DelinQuent]

nerdy ass delivery, sounding like you should be trading stocks. lmfao, no offense tho, it's unique.

flow comes and goes, it's eh tho. gotta work on that.

hook is yuck, not feeling it.

second verse sounds like a diff person, but again flow comes and goes.

noodles on it, booty's chronic LMFAO, third verse was WAY better than the other two.

overall 6/10, choppy flow and a bad hook ruin this song. so work on your flow a bit and try harder with the hook