*New* Big Mak & Apocalypse: "Don't Test Me"

[Makaveli525]

A quick track me and Apocalypse did on that classic Showbiz & A.G. beat.

I got the first and third verses, he's on two and four.

Anyone care to listen?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/58518837cd77d86a/

[Xray]

Your Big Mak right? Your flow and lyrics were tight, but the delivery was poor. Could have come alot stronger than that, Apocalypse barely flowed, and his delivery was poor to. Everything beside your delivery is good, you should definitely work on your delivery man. Nice choice in beats to, that old classic shit is always good.

[DelinQuent]

well this is NOT my style whatsoever so dont take my negativity as me hating on you.

to me you sound WAY too old school, so i can't get into your verse. you need a more energetic delivery and idk a more new school flow.

apoc has horrible delivery, he sounds bored and he's making me bored.

you come back and i can listen again lol. rhyming is much better this time around, actually kinda liked this, but it still needs a better delivery.

apoc comes back and he STILL sounds bored as fuck. he really does need a gun, to blow his own mind, without it he's gonna be bored forever and might end up gouging his own eyes out.

overall 5/10, you have solid lyrics, but the delivery is where you lack majorly. also the old school flow came and went with the 90's. as Tupac said "evolve or disappear" keep working my dude.