TRshady EYES ONLY: IRONIC - Get Busy (EXCLUSIVE!!!)

[_Ironic_]

I made this for my upcomming album. This is going to be exclusively dropped for TRshady ONLY. I'm lookin for some REAL feedback. let me know likes/dislikes, what's weak, what's hot. THANK YOU!


PS) the filter on my voice was done on purpose..I am fully aware that it does not sound right at some parts, but when I finish the 3rd verse changes will be made...
PLEASE DO NOT COMMENT ON THE FILTER ON MY VOICE: I KNOW HOW IT SOUNDS.

without further ado, I give to you:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/586209450bdab9dd/

[Requiem]

link's expired

[_Ironic_]

updated..my bad.

[Requiem]

u got a really good rap voice, and the flow is pretty damn good man. ur delivery is good too, but it sounds a little monotone.
ur lyrics aren't bad, there are moments where it shine, but it sounds repetitive sometimes. but u defnly got a hell of alot of potential with this.
the beat's good, but a little repetitive.
overall: 7/10 pretty good, sounds like today's radio rap

edit: the chorus was done very well, forgot to mention. nice job with it

[_Ironic_]

thanks for the feed bro:

That's the style I was going for on this track...it's a radio hit that you'd NEVER hear on the radio.

[JMG]

[_Ironic_]

:n:

[theJFKshow]

lyrics were dog shit

2/10

[_Ironic_]

lyrics were dog shit

2/10

thanks for the info.

[JMG]

jp man i feel it.

[_Ironic_]

jp man i feel it.

stick to text. this is audio...there's many more things that go into making A SONG. it's not just lyrics. if we lived in your world...everything would be like the matrix, except 1's and 0's they'd be the ABC's.

[Xray]

Mixing was really bad, that flanger shit got on my nerves. Beat sounded like nothing but tremble, barely can feel the kick or snare. Delivery was good, flow was good, lyrics were street which I like. This could turn out into a good track if you re-mix this, cause that mix just doesn't work.

[_Ironic_]

Mixing was really bad, that flanger shit got on my nerves. Beat sounded like nothing but tremble, barely can feel the kick or snare. Delivery was good, flow was good, lyrics were street which I like. This could turn out into a good track if you re-mix this, cause that mix just doesn't work.

good looks on the feed, the mixing isn't even close to finished...just wanted some feed, thanks for the input though

[_Ironic_]

uppin

[KDEWolf]

so wait why is their a flanger on ur voice? What was the artistic decision decision in it? I dont understand