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(SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby Xray » Apr 15th, '09, 20:38

Whats good got a brand new track for my peoples, SA Diablo is no longer my name, I don't like it anymore I feel it sounded childish. My new long term for life (Im 100% sure about this) is Illegal Heist. Anyways I wrote this song (besides some lines on the second verse) today and recorded it today aswell, its for my upcoming mixtape which is still yet to be named. My best song this year thats for sure, and I feel its one of my best songs to date, not being cocky just saying what I feel about this song. Took good amount of time mixing it so let me know what you think thanks. Also the beat is Snowgoons - Starlight for promotional use only.

[Intro]
(Radio'd lines from verse 1 are said)

Illegal Heist..yo...

[Verse One]
Death warrant, Illegal Heist keep scouring
A wet coming, lost souls bloods pouring
Drains clearing, operation warning sorted
Rappers warned eliminate ya like a Scottish swordsmen
Bravehearted, raps Mel Gibson spotted
you crave-for-it, the violence cause silence is horrid
Wack is sweet, buttered biscuits like they came from danish
butter fingers when I throw bars they couldn't catch it
I make em vanish, your rich? fuck a Sean John
your time is gone, mine is born, you won't spawn
Ressurrections out the question, you ain't James Bond
Illegal He-ist protects his goal like he was Buffon
I spin emcees like beyblades, leave em sprung
cause apart of Sajjad motherfuckers wouldn't want
Wicked one, one level behind none
except for some, but for the dumb, your death come

[Chorus: While sample sings Death Warrant is said 3 times]

[Verse Two]
Im an emcees writers block, a barricade
put walls between your lyrics so they won't escape
I'm innocent, I'll stab your birth certificate
guilty I've never been, my sins accelerate
My heart is tended black, I burn like a rash
I spit wars like the battle in the ballarat
masses occur, like massacre, of bodies blured
silenced unheard cause death is always deserved
Im breaking boundaries like the mexicans at border reach
Illegal Heist, fuckers know I'm bound to steal your needs
I don't go by emotions, hell controls me
heated by hell, spitting inferno
with deserters of life, motherfuckers you'll die tonight
I got the warrant, it agrees and says to burry you alive
Fear no more, your death was sought in sight
so motherfuckers today, your death is certified.

[Chorus: While sample sings Death Warrant is said 3 times]

[Outro]
Death Warrant...yeah, uh.....Blitznext.....Hybrid Purity....Illegal Heist....Big Ax-D...
Uh...........yeah.......Sydney....uh

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Last edited by Xray on Apr 15th, '09, 21:57, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal He-ist - Death Warrant

Postby randomghost » Apr 15th, '09, 20:54

damnnn..bro :o :o fuckin amazing ass beat :o tell me where i can get beats like this :shifty: ...mm...lovin ur style...good flow....nice delivery....lyrics is amazing :y: ..hot hook..really enjoyed this track....good job bro :y: :worship: :worship: goof stuff
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal He-ist - Death Warrant

Postby mcZu » Apr 15th, '09, 21:24

Dope beat, good choice on that. Both verses were dope; first verse had a flawless flow and a great delivery. Whereas second verse's flow was almost flawless; slipped once, right around the mexican punch.
Delivery in the second verse was great, lyrics were in both verses above average; dope lyrics, fitted the concept you had going pretty well. Mixing sounded amazing, pro like. Chorus, intro and outro were enjoyable, nothing out of place. New name is better then SA Diablo, dope song Illegal He-ist, enjoyable shit :y:
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal He-ist - Death Warrant

Postby DelinQuent » Apr 15th, '09, 21:49

what does the new name mean? as of now i don't like it, kinda seems pointless, but if it has meaning i may like it.

flow on first verse is great and so is the delivery (this is the sajjad i was missing :y:)

as mczu said flow fucked up on the second verse when you said "boundaries".

other than that it's a completely solid track, one of your best.

overall i'd rate it a 7/10 due to the lazy concept, but it's still an AMAZING track. keep it up my dude.
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal He-ist - Death Warrant

Postby Slimm » Apr 15th, '09, 21:56

Damn man great stuff. Awesome beat u got there, loved the sample. Some nice punches, my fav one was the buffon hehe. Thing i liked the most was the flow and delivery, loved it :y:.
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby Xray » Apr 15th, '09, 22:47

Thanks alot for the feed, appreciate it very much. :worship:

And yo DQ I changed my name from SaJJad because its a muslim name and I don't want to be seen as a religious rapper. Also some muslims might get offended because they'll think I'm cussing and shit to bring down the muslim name, and I don't want that to happen. Illegal Heist is alot better than SaJJad its much more undergroundish (Which thats what Im all about). Heist means to steal to rob, which in my case means I'll steal the fans, I'll steal the shows, I'll steal your interest. I got a history of stealing too (not rapwise) lol, and I love that name so get used to it haha.

Thanks for the feed once again. :worship:
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby Requiem » Apr 15th, '09, 22:47

holy shit man, great track :y:
verse 1 has so much ferocity, and the flow is unparalleled. the lyrics are pretty good, not ur best, but ur delivery more than makes up for that.
verse 2 - :o great lyrics on this, and the flow/delivery are still fantastic.
chorus- :worship: sick as hell man. no words.

overall, this is defnly one of ur best tracks to date. mixing is great man, nice job. and quality is nice. :y:

9/10, Great Track, Hands Down :happy:
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby DƎRDYPK » Apr 16th, '09, 00:30

:o holy shit
i just peeped that shit after finishing a bowel :y:
really caught my ear wit the energy you got going :y:
that 1st verse was off the chain my favorite lines were

I make em vanish, your rich? fuck a Sean John
your time is gone, mine is born, you won't spawn
Ressurrections out the question, you ain't James Bond
Illegal He-ist protects his goal like he was Buffon


the beat was a nice selection too really loved that sample :y:
some dope shit :y:
keep up the work :b: :smoking:
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby DelinQuent » Apr 16th, '09, 00:36

Xray wrote:Thanks alot for the feed, appreciate it very much. :worship:

And yo DQ I changed my name from SaJJad because its a muslim name and I don't want to be seen as a religious rapper. Also some muslims might get offended because they'll think I'm cussing and shit to bring down the muslim name, and I don't want that to happen. Illegal Heist is alot better than SaJJad its much more undergroundish (Which thats what Im all about). Heist means to steal to rob, which in my case means I'll steal the fans, I'll steal the shows, I'll steal your interest. I got a history of stealing too (not rapwise) lol, and I love that name so get used to it haha.

Thanks for the feed once again. :worship:


i get it now :y: good call with the change from SaJJad, i completely understand. when i first saw he-ist, i was like wtf? but now i see Heist and it makes sense. just hope you can keep this name saj... xra... sa diab... Illegal Heist!! lmfao keep up the good work tho man
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby Robbie G » Apr 16th, '09, 01:03

I understand why you changed your name but You'll still be Sajjad on my ipod. :sweating: Also maybe it's just your accent but it sounds weird when you say heist. Around here it's "hi-is-t", and you say it like "illegal east" But not really a big deal, i'm sure that i'm just being stupid. :p

The song was dope. I like how the beat was a pretty laid back but you still came with a hard delivery. Tape will be hot. :worship:
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 16th, '09, 09:46

This is raw.
This is fire.
This is perfect.



Nuff said. :worship:
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby Nu Syd » Apr 16th, '09, 10:07

o_o DAMN!!, i agree with the others,fucken crazy 10/10
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby Drama Setter » Apr 16th, '09, 11:07

hey , It was fuckin great man . I'm proud of you Sajjad . thx . :y:
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby Tornado » Apr 16th, '09, 15:00

Your second best trackto date (because i worship bump) , honestly there's nothing i can criticise on the track, seriously fire Straight From The Underground
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Re: (SaJJad) Illegal Heist - Death Warrant

Postby threeandtwenty » Apr 16th, '09, 15:38

illegal heist brings an old west image to me...like spurs and six shooters.

but dopeness on the track....lyrics were a 7.5,flow 8.5-9 imo. :y:
dont know if its your style,but the way you flip a sentence backwards sometimes lyrically skews coherence.like Wack is sweet, buttered biscuits like they came from danish...A wet coming, lost souls bloods pouring,offsets the tenses a bit.just what i think.
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