2 free beats for you

[mceddie]

hey guys i produced these two beats, im not much of a producer, and theyre nothing special at all, but please feel free to use them if you'd like. a bit of credit where used would be appreciated though, and if you use em itd be cool if you let me see your work.

Say Your Prayers
http://www.zshare.net/audio/590447753917f4cf/

Some Day
http://www.zshare.net/audio/59044931cda549b0/

[_Ironic_]

these beats are way too basic to actually make a serious track to...

but the first one showed ALOT of promise...you have alot of nice sounds in the first track...you can incorporate them together WAY better though imo...seems like you have too many sounds because each one is doing something different...if you keep a more simplistic approach to it..it could do much better....keep up the work though..with some proper mixing, and maybe a sample I could see this as a hit record...u just need some harder bass.


second beat sounds like you made it with all the original fruity loops sounds they give you when you first open it...NOT feelin it..those sounds are so played out to me. up your sound library.

[mceddie]

thanks for the advice man, well yeah like i said im really new at this so they're bound to be not so great, they're actually the first two rap beats ive produced. hopefully i can learn though, and produce something of high quality.

[_Ironic_]

thanks for the advice man, well yeah like i said im really new at this so they're bound to be not so great, they're actually the first two rap beats ive produced. hopefully i can learn though, and produce something of high quality.

yeah..you'll get better with time..you got promise,
holla @ my track though, let me know what u think
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=59781

[Noeezy]

nice shit bro, sounds original
n u got some talent if these are your first beats
but yeah jus work on what they said
hit me up when you make more k?

[Noeezy]

yo can you add some Claps to the Say Your Prayers beat?
like the 3/4 mark of each measure/ so that it goes with the bass
if you can that would be great!