C-Riz-Guess Who I Am

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

here we go again..workin on a project...containing 1verse tracks...but im still not sure about the tape concept tbh...maybe i expand some maybe won't...we'll see...enough talk
here is my lil preview how the tape will turn out

C-Riz-Guess Who I Am
http://www.zshare.net/audio/59258759cea9828c/

enjoy

[<Stiiccy>]

yeah this was really good...I really thought the beat was magical..

your flow has gotten alot better...the lyrics seem to be preety good
only thing is..when theres words that are hard for you to pronounce, you have trouble flowing them...work on that a little..

otherwise i thought it was preety good man

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz sticcy and yeah will do... thanks

[preest]

Yeah man I'm feeling the production quality and the effort put into it, the lyrics were ok although I'm a fan of more complex rhyme schemes. My only problem with it was your trouble with the pronounciation, but if you went the right way you could flip the accent on its head and turn it into some crazy shit we havent heard of!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thanks for checkin man

[randomghost]

nice beat bro lovin ur delivery here thats wat i was lookin for...thats wat i meant by energetic delivery nice lyrics... pronunciation is way better....nice stuff man..i liked it..but kinda short though

[B.A.D.]

again that studio-quality

you always get good beats for your tracks hahaha, hmm, I'm startin to think that one verse tracks isn't a bad idea, cuz this one was HOT

can't wait for the mixtape man

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you ax and random
yeah i prolly go for the one verse idea.....
Tape Name Will Be Announced Right.....Now: C-Riz - One Verse Wonder
btw uppin

[threeandtwenty]

you're accent is raw,and you're flow is really good
difficult to understand this part:' you'll be there till the end,later than ..?..'

not that this really matters...but you're voice at the end when you say 'man' sounds a little kiddish.guess you were tired by then.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thanks dude..
its "..later than compressed like sand" hehe..
yo thanks again...im 17 for information thx again

[Xray]

Like I said on MSN bro the flow sounds alive and bouncy, the delivery sounds wild and vicious. And your voice sounds raw on this, really liking this verse. Can't understand 100% just by listening, but when I do concentrate on it I can. But it shouldn't be like that, should be able to understand just by listening. You should speak english more often, like I don't know find someone that you know speaks english and just speak english with them lol. Or get online on PS3 and just speak english to whoever, cause you need to understand how its spoken 100% to improve your pronunciation and grammer. Mixing has stepped up I can tell, sounds alot more better, love the quality. Good track man, and nice choice of beat, you damn goon lover.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx sajjad...appreciate the feedback

[Tash8]

flow is a bit choppy but damn i love the new style, ur a lot more upbeat, it fits u more..... good job, feelin it....not feelin the beat, way too happy imo.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz tash