**Mixtape** C-Riz-One Verse Wonder

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah its out people...just a small project again
somthin bigger will definitly hit TR this year....but for now i hope you enjoy this One Verse Wonder project....dont wanna talk so much..here you go

C-Riz-One Verse Wonder
Tracklist
01. Guess Who I Am
02. Heads or Tails (german verse from me)
03. Monster Wave
04. Beat Your Speaker Up
05. Take 'Em Out
06. Heat Coming
07. Real World
08. Talkin' Bout You
09. Destined To Shine
10. Grand Finale
11. [BONUS]Watch Out(Remix)
12. [BONUS]Take Trips

Download HERE!

check it and leave couple thoughts

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

haha sorry about that..lmao...TR was being so slow...then gave me a "page cant be found" during submitting..was strange...never was so hard to post a topic haha..
plus sorry about the fail in my .rar file haha skipped a number
argh.. lol

[randomghost]

downloading now...feed soon

[Xray]

Downloading, full review later and don't worry I plan to review this earlier than my last review for your last tape. For real I'm not playing.

[randomghost]

here is ma review bro:

01 Guess Who I Am: i left feed for this track already...i like it....

02 Heads Or Tails: love the beat..good lyrics, nice german words here..haha..good stuff...nice
mixing, lovin german language here

03 Monster Wave: wow sounds old skool, good evil beat, nice lyrics...good flow, delivery is awesome fits the beat perfect, i like this track...good hook...

04 Beat Your Speakers Up: haha reminds me of high skool movies soundtrack, not ma type of track though....

05 Take 'em Out: sounds like a lil wayne track, south beat...not ma type as well...but i like ur lyrics, flow is good, hot hook

06 Heat Coming: wow i really can feel the heat, dope beat...hot lyrics...crazy flow...ma fav hot track so far...good stuff...love it

07 Real World: true words, good conept, nice lyrics, an ok flow, nice delivery...kinda energitic good track...hook is ok

08 Talkin Bout You: i think i left feed for this b4/....love it...ma 2nd fav track here...simply
amazing

10 Destined To Shine: an ok beat, good lyrics, flow is good...ur accent sound perfect here..

11 Grand Finale: WOOOOOOW...HOT TRACK....u should do a full song here,,,dayme...crazy beat, HOt
flow, nice lyrics and delivery...simply hot....thats one of ma fav tracks as well

12 [Bonus]Watch Out(Remix): good accent here as well...best flow on the album...good lyrics,
nice remix...good stuff...i like this track..

13 [Bonus]Take Trips: WOOW lovin this style on this jazz reggae beat...u flowed good here..
nice i love it


overall...good mixtape man...i enjoyed listening.,...keep them coming..u really got better...
every now and then u get better and thats good..coz i can see more progree everytime...cheers

[B.A.D.]

I will download today and feed very soon

very busy week coming ahead so... but I will

[threeandtwenty]

criz competing with relapse i see
feed coming soon

[DelinQuent]

Downloading now, will leave full feedback within 3 days. if TR ever happens to work again while i'm at my computer lol.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz people....appreciate the regognition so far...and will appreciate your opinions on it
@threeandtwenty..that how the game is played....haha
@random....thanks a bunch bro....

[DelinQuent]

1-dope intro, delivery is FUCKING SICK. flow is also really nice on this, fucks up in a few spots tho. nice attitude on this, definitely a dope verse.

2-german, i don't speak it. i actually took 3 years of german, and i still can hardly say my name.

3-delivery again, dope. flow is a little bit off in spots, for the most part stays on good tho. rhyming is nice. the ending isn't that good tho.

4-delivery is nice. flow is nice as fuck. rhymes are also nice. this whole track is dope, i'd like to see you finish this.

5-you don't sound right on this beat. but, flow is nice, delivery is eh, not enough attitude in it.

6-delivery is sick. flow is eh, doesn't really go with the beat in my opinion, i would have done this differently. still a decent track.

7-rhyming is dope at the start. nice multies. delivery is decent. flow is messy, syllables are messing you up. love the outro.

8-i believe i gave feed on this. but i will again. dope delivery, flow is sick too. rhyming is nice as well.

9-not here?

10-flow is decent, not awesome, not bad. rhyming is decent as well. nothing special about this one.

11-love this beat, can you send me it? flow is nice, rhyming is pretty nice too. again, nothing really stands out on this one.

12-spizzy?!? flow is nice, rhyming decent.

13-this makes me bored. not into the extremely slow flow. some spots were nice tho.

overall, almost every verse was damn good. it's now time to make some good hooks, and keep the good verses coming, and make good songs. good luck

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thanks Dq... and somethin will amaze this place..

[threeandtwenty]

good tape overall ,wheres the 1 enitre song you said?
on the whole i liked 3,6,11,1.
didnt really feel 4,5,10.

1.already befor-ed
2.dont understand german,but your delivery was good.
3.brilliant verse...probably my favourite on this tape.i like the beat and flow on it...delivery kinda dark too.

"dont ask for anything trust me i will say no
you get molested,welcome to my verbal rape show"
good stuff man

4.dont like your flow on this,too choppy for me.didnt like the hook either.
your pronunciation of 'clean' was weird,like your voice went real deep when you said it.

5.sounded southside-like,the repetitive hook was kinda catchy...but the 3rd person references to yourself was a bit corny .
the c-walk reference sounded out of place to me.

6.was back to good.like your delivery and the beat...the whole tone of the song was pretty good.

7.good verse...found it hard to understand in a few places,did you say something that sonds like reservoir?you should've put in scratches in between make/make.otherwise it was a good track.

10.like the beat a lot...but i didnt like your flow that much (rock the house and beautiful music parts).the intro/outro was good.

11.like this one,beat/flow/delivery was good.lyrics were good too.

12.pretty gangsta yo.did you pan the first part (and part of hook) to left speaker only?..nice hook

13.your flow sounded real mellow on this,fitting for a song that has roll-up-and- smoke in it.nice song to chill to.


in conclusion...i think your delivery/flow is really good.
i also think you'd do better if you stepped up your lyrics.they're not bad...but i think in some songs they were a lot better than on others,so im sure there's potential for improvement there.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you 3and20... glad you liked most of it
reservoir? huh? ....but yeah if some dont know i Take 'em out is a remix to Walk it out....
but thanks a mill again

[Tornado]

Will check soon my man

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

cheers tornado