High Ghost - Foul Mouth

[High Ghost]

wazzanin everybody ..
this was my second track i do ..
and i did it bout 5 months ago ..
the first verse isnt lyrical at all ..
the second verse is a lil lyrical ..
its just beacause i wrote the fist verse 2 years ago ..

Verse 1 :

now imma give u the sickest chemical formula ..
mix with a men and a pad you'll get a song fulla ..
cussin and cursin .. that when u hear it u know its comin from a high person ..
who got somethin in his min and realy needs nursin ..
cuz its just fulla FUCK .. and just fulla SHIT ..
fulla SUCK MY COCK .. and just fulla BITCH ..
i got a foul mouth , wat can i say ..
and u cant do shit u can only pray ..
that maybe one day ..
i will leave the fuckn cussin .. and leave the cussin bustin ..
and start some clean rap for th lil kids ..
and send my rhymez straight to death ..
man it realy wont happen ..
not when im rappin ..
outta my heart ..
imma forever say FUCK in the start ..
of every rhyme and every lyrical hit ..
and nothin will stop me but a miracle ..

Chorus :

Shit .. Fuck .. Bitch .. Suck .. My Dick .. U Slut ..
the mouth is foul .. just ask around .. i got a foul mouth ..
mathafuckaz i got a foul mouth ..

Verse 2 :
Just imagine me doin cesonred music ..
u wont understand it , there wont be no amusment ..
Even DJ Mix ..
man he says shit ..
i wont produce it ..
cuz u reduced its ..
whole soul ..
without the cussin theres no song ..
u jst fucked the hip hop ..
its like a tux wid a flip flop ..
its like clock without the tic toc ..
it just aint workin ..
it makes me go bezerk & ..
loos my mind ..
not to use in my rhymez ..
all the words that i want ..
thats why i curse and u dont ..
cuz i dont care wat u think ..
but u afraid of the ink ..
that can be put on papers ..
bout u by the haterz ..
thats the difference between me ..
and thats why my words are findin way in through ..


Zshare : http://www.zshare.net/audio/6068804643980e60/

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

@ using my future beat lol...
track was kinda weird since the flow switched every 2nd line....was a touch too bouncy...like switchin it up every 4-8 bars is kool..but every 2 bars meh....also twice your flow was totally off...
delievery could be better too...sounded bored...
liked the hook in total...its simple but somehow effective...just the mixing on it should be better...

[Solace]

Just reading the lyrics, it's all pretty wack. I'd say get better at writing before audio recording, you know so you are concentrated on just 1 thing to improve faster.

[High Ghost]

thx everybody for these comments ..
i was afraid ppl will tell me that dis song is DOPE ..
i would leave dis forum forever ..
cuz everyone is wack ..
but thank god ppl looked at right ..
just wait for the next track ..
beleive me it aint gonna be wack ..
PEACE