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Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

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Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 5th, '09, 02:17

http://www.zshare.net/audio/609550022c8db793/

This is a single for an Album/mixtape coming out called Frozen Soul; Swollen Heart. By me of course. :y: Date is TBH...

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You're all scared, why are you running people?
cause I threw a boy in a ditch full of herion needles?
injected dope, through every one of his viens?
till his brain mainframe explodes in flames?
drink his blood, now watch it drip from my skin
smack elderly with denters then punch em back in
let this track spin and that's it, blast with my magnums
grab them, satan tried to get me, I smacked him
raped a bitch with twelve guage, gave birth to a nine
3 bullets shot when he jerked off right in her eye
went to a movie seen a bitch with a booty walkin' to me
stole it like a pirate and left her looking fruity
people ask if I get dirty, I look in their eyes
they see bloodstains on my pupils, they started to cry
what the fuck, Anonymous must be a villian
if they really think that, then I'll really fuckin' kill them

Who woulda thought, Anonymous and Kez would rip this
split shit, we don't give a fuck, just witness,
listen, sit down, get ready to learn,
thuganomic ways to not give a fuck, ya heard?

Anonymous
Now why would I try to be healthy?
all I do is fuck the nurses who are trying to help me
a couple fights later I'm back in the hospital
poppin pills to calm me like sedatives in my fuckin' nostrils
these kids want me to shut my mouth, K
I'll rap in body language and still get paid
fill this age with bullets when I spill the cage
get in my way and still get killed with rage
nobody thinks, they just sit and they speak
you on the streets but can't toe to toe on concrete?
Honey, your ass always looks good in sweat pants
but take them off so I can leak like sweat glands
or maybe I'll just take them off myself
and smack that ass so hard that your eyes fell
a chain to your panties you should a brought
Anon your evil.. hmm.. who would have thought?

Who woulda thought, Anonymous and Kez would rip this
split shit, we don't give a fuck, just witness,
listen, sit down, get ready to learn,
thuganomic ways to not give a fuck, ya heard?

Kez
Just wait a second while i don my black tux and V mask
I told you motherfuckers that i would be back
Me and Anon, here to remind you all of how we rap
A chillier reception than fucking Relapse!
The disk spins, the evil's released in an instant
When this shit hits your eardrum, it splits!
Who would of thought, Anonymous and Kez would rip this?
Rip off the walls and deface them with heiroglyphics
Imprinted with the blood of a thousand slit wrists
Involuntarily given by our music's victims
And this is the reason i do this, which is
To be sadistic and have an excuse to kick pricks
In the dick, tits or minge whichever you have bitches
Should have respected me and Anon's shit but you didn't!
Put you on trial for it, if it pleases the court
It's not a suitable defence to say who would have thought!
Frozen soul
Swollen heart
MC Anonymous
Kez
2009
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Solace » Jun 5th, '09, 02:29

Dope shit man. I gotta hook you up with a cover :shifty: MC Anonymous you did really good, and I really enjoyed the chorus. 2nd verse was better than the first imo. Kez had a nice smooth flow and delivery. I enjoyed your verse to Kez. Glad to see you too working together. I liked the musical laughter at the end with the intro. 8/10 :y:
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 5th, '09, 02:30

I'm gonna be honest

annonymous, man, you can write good lyrics and stuff, but don't try to copy eminem, find your own style

kez came amazing, you mixed your verse pretti well, also your flow went amazingly well on this one, your lyrics are great and crazy hahaha, you got that amazing TMA style, and we gonna rip it up

good track, except for the mock of eminem
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 5th, '09, 02:31

Solace wrote:Dope shit man. I gotta hook you up with a cover :shifty: MC Anonymous you did really good, and I really enjoyed the chorus. 2nd verse was better than the first imo. Kez had a nice smooth flow and delivery. I enjoyed your verse to Kez. Glad to see you too working together. I liked the musical laughter at the end with the intro. 8/10 :y:

Thanks bro. :y:
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 5th, '09, 02:34

Big Ax-D wrote:I'm gonna be honest

annonymous, man, you can write good lyrics and stuff, but don't try to copy eminem, find your own style

kez came amazing, you mixed your verse pretti well, also your flow went amazingly well on this one, your lyrics are great and crazy hahaha, you got that amazing TMA style, and we gonna rip it up

good track, except for the mock of eminem

I wasn't trying to imitate anyone; kinda unfair to say that... but I respect your opinion. :y: Thanks for the feed.
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Kez » Jun 5th, '09, 02:46

Thanks to Ax, Solace and anyone else who's checked the track.

Remember, if Zshare isn't working for you, you can always listen to it on my MySpace
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Tash8 » Jun 5th, '09, 03:05

it was an okay song, anon ur vocal presence is atrocious... the second verse was a lot smoother and calmer and that's the type of delivery you should work with.. the other shit is just like screaming, i felt like i was listening to death metal.. kez ur verse was okay, very emotionless, vocab and rhymes were great, flow was good, but it didn't have the regular spark that most of your verses usually have.
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby threeandtwenty » Jun 5th, '09, 11:37

dope song.only thing against is mc anon delivery,like tash said it's not smooth enough...i cant listen to the song over again because it sounds too scratchy.like your rapping with your mouth full of food.

prefer kez rapping slow than fast,like on this than on the previous song...though toward the end your voice started to drone a bit.
whose arm is this?..i must've cut it off at the pharmacist
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 5th, '09, 22:19

i have to repeat myself with saying that your (anon) delievery on the verses was lacking...this time you stepped down too much....try too up it again a little...but not that much like in your 1st audio steps....get me?....
your pronouncation was very bad due the fact it really sounded like you have your mouth full of food
flow was oookay....i think you slipped 3-4times cuz you rushed a line...cuz I THINK you wanted to keep it complex...which didnt work out in couple parts
what i can say...the hook has a nice raw delievery on it...maybe you it couldbe more smooth/catchy/hook-like...namean?
to kez....yoo did you do your verse in one take? if yes then dayme....also nice lyrics...flow was smoother than anon....but didnt shine on this track that much...
wut suprised me was the mixing...sounded like a step up (who mixed this) and was well done
overall: nice lyrical track....was pretty even of both...no one really murdered the other person...maybe kez just shined a lil more due his experience...but you will get there anon..
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Kez » Jun 5th, '09, 23:25

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:to kez....yoo did you do your verse in one take?


If you mean all at once without punching in or anything, yes
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Xray » Jun 6th, '09, 04:54

Loving the beat, old school sounding, crazy shit. Verses were good lyrically, and fun to listen to. Delivery and flow wasn't perfect from both, but it was decent. Mixing was good. :shifty: Chorus was catchy, oldschool sounding indeed. That pitch effect you did was a very nice touch. This shit is different from a lot of tracks that get posted here, so nice approach keep it up, both of you, and looking forward to the tape. Anno domino on the beat. :shifty:
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 6th, '09, 14:51

Thank you for the feed people! :y: :y:
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Kez » Jun 8th, '09, 17:55

Time to bump
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby MoBrat » Jun 9th, '09, 09:34

good track beat was really good lyrics were interesting n flow was on point for most of it...when was this recorded? :confusion: :whistle:
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby randomghost » Jun 9th, '09, 15:58

mc annonymous...got really better...verses are good...flow on pint..delivery is ok..2nd verse is better than the 1st....beat is simple..sound like old skool stuff..i liked it...kez man,.long time...really missing ur voice...it changed alot to be honest...to a better voice obviosuly ...good stuff fellas..keep it up..nice single..lookin forward to hear more :y: :b:
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